My 8th Story: The Eternal Shadow King

Good chapter! Though violent.


PS: Well... Obviously I'm Captain Dirt Jar....
PPS: Woah... This chapter is a recipe to make a Kakashi out of your friend...
PPPS: I could be making a seq... (I'll PM you guys the rest, by the rest I mean Louise, Sven Undead and maybe Blab...)

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I feel so embarrassed now >-<

Guess what? Only one more chapter to go until the last chapter! Also thanks guys for reaching 100 posts! (@Sven007 being the 100th post). This has been one popular story! But like all stories, they all must be put to a rest. So two more chapters to go guys. Get your pop corn ready ;)

Characters With Major Roles:
@LouiseXminerX
@Kryokin
@nala
Characters With Minor Roles:
@TwageTomato
@Sven007
@TheUndeadBrave
@CaptainJackValdy

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Chapter 19 - The Blood Will Forever Flow
Kry's View:
Once her words finished, she leaped out, about to slash me into quarters.
I did a quick back flip, but I landed on my back since I only practiced this a couple of times.
To my luck, I actually kicked one of her axes out of her hand. Heh, lucky me.
"Nala, grab her golden axe! NOW!" I demanded.
I saw her stare at the axe, possibly afraid of what will happen if she grabs it.
"COME ON!" I shouted.
Before I could see if she grabbed the axe or not, Louise stomped her foot on me.
Blood dripped onto my clothes from her teeth...
"Can't you see... my stomach is a graveyard... it needs flesh..." She whispered.
Her face came up to mine.
I wondered what she was about to do.
That's when I realized her teeth then touched my neck.
She started to bite.
Her teeth were sharp like needles. They dug deeper into my neck. I thought my neck was about to break.
Just then, something made her push back onto the wall.
I got up and scratched my neck.

"Yoohoo!" Someone called.
I examined the room.
My eyes then discovered Twage, who was waving his arm with joy.
Agent S then finally woke up after Twage slapped him.
"Ehh... what happened... what the..." Agent S said dizzily.
He was about to scream like a girl... again... until Twage covered his mouth with his hand.
I looked at Louise to see what he was screaming about.
Turns out that Louise landed right next to the other axe that knocked out of her hand before.
I looked at Nala angrily who was still just sitting there.
"I told you to get the axe! Why didn't you-"
An axe flew centimeters away from my ear.
I immediately turned around, noticing the axe aiming straight at Agent S who was on the ground.
The axe just landed above him on the wall, making him... scream again... (Sigh...)
"Grab the axe Agent S!" I commanded.

Immediately, he grabbed the axe and pulled it out of the wall.
He gripped onto it tight and was ready to strike.
But something was in his eyes... the reflection of the golden axe shined bright in his eyes...
I noticed some kind of red smoke, starting to grow around him.
The Golden Axe... it's controlling him!
I ran straight towards him before he could loose control.
I punched the axe straight out of his hands.
In less then a second, he was about to normal.
"What happened? My whole vision just went red for like a minute." Agent S questioned with concern.
"I'll tell you later. Watch out!" I shouted.
Louise quickly stabbed the wall with her axe right in between us.
We decided to escape.

We headed for the door and left Louise who was trying to pull her axe out.
That's when I stopped before he headed out of the fortress.
Agent S and Twage noticed me.
"Hey Kry! Hurry up! She'll catch up soon!" Twage explained.
"Somethings missing..." I said.
I examined who was here in front of me.
"We forgot Nala!" I shouted with realization.
I turned around and went back into the room.
Nala was pushing her back against the wall while Louise marched closer to her with her two axes.
I couldn't make up my mind if I should save Nala or leave her.
If I come in and try to make her escape, we might both be dead. Maybe even more.
I was about to charge at Nala to free her.
But then Nala got out a gun and tried to shoot at Louise.
I gasped in fear.
"Nala stop!" Agent S screamed.
She kept shooting. Her aim was quite off, but every-time she shot a bullet, they came closer to Louise.
I looked at Louise in the eye... she was scared... if she gets shot, she'll die.

She then tripped on Undead's body and fell down.
Nala marched up to her and aimed her gun at her head.
Then something happened... Louise's body changed.
Her clothes were back to normal, her axes disappeared. She was back!
However, she was unconscious. But Nala did not move her gun down at all.
She shot a bullet right next to her, shoot a piece of hair off her.
"NO!" I shouted.
I ran towards Nala, who was heartbeats away from taking another shot.
I grabbed her, making her fall on her stomach.
I snatched her gun and threw it away in the corner of the room.
"Nala... she's okay now..." I said calmly.
I thought she calmed down now, so I let her go and I got up.
She got up and stared at Louise's helpless body.
However, she dug her hand in her pocket, grabbing something out.
She was holding a knife.
She was about to stab her straight in the heart, until Agent S headbutted her.
Her knife slipped out of her hands, and she fell down on her back.

I rushed towards her to check if she was alright.
Luckily she woke up immediately.
"Kry! Louise is waking up!" Twage cheered with joy.

Louise's View:
The darkness started to fade away as colors was finally painted in.
I was staring straight at the ceiling.
My stomach made me feel so weak and sick. How many days has it been since I last ate?
All of my limbs felt like they weighed 1000 pounds.
Then I noticed Twage's face.
"Louise! Your okay!" He cheered.
"What... what happened to me?" I whispered.
"The demon spell came back and you were worst then ever! You almost tried to eat Kry. Ha ha." Twage explained.
"Wha-what? Why would I-"
That's when I noticed Kry pop up.
"Kry... why did I try to eat you?" I questioned.
"Captain Jack put you in a cage and gave you heaps of demon blood, which made you turn into a even more powerful demon with two golden axes. You almost ate me and almost killed Nala. But I'm glad your okay." He explained.
Twage helped me get up, then Agent S hugged me.
"I'm so glad your not a scary, creepy demon again! I almost wet my pants looking into your red eyes!" He said while sobbing.

"Let's hurry up and get out of here..." Nala hissed.
Agent S let go of me then we left the room.
We were about to leave the whole chamber, until someone tapped my shoulder.
I stopped and turned around to check who wanted me.
"Louise... I think we should suck all the blood out of you so you won't have that demon curse anymore." She suggested.
"If we suck all the blood out of her, she wouldn't be alive! What are you saying?" Kry argued.
"We have to remove all the blood out of her. This curse is too dangerous!" She argued.
"Never!" Kry shouted.
"Fine... I'll drain all the blood out of her myself..." She hissed.
She got out a knife and was about to stab me.
Agent S quickly pushed her with such force into her.
She almost tripped onto the floor until she did a back flip.
However she didn't realize where she was going.
Then she back flipped right into a machine.
We rushed towards her as tubes started to get stabbed into her skin.
"How do you shut this thing down?" Twage shouted as he punched all of the buttons.
"OPERATION NOW STARTING TO SUCK ALL INGREDIENTS OUT OF THE TARGET." The machine responded.
Then Nala started to scream in pain.
Her skin started to look like a plastic bag and the color of her skin started to get lighter into a pale white.
"OPERATION COMPLETE. HAVE A NICE DAY." The machine responded.
The door opened, and Nala fell onto the ground.
I held her up.
"Nala, wake up!" I screamed.
She slowly opened her eyes.
"Why did you try to stab me before..." I questioned.
"And why did you also try to kill her when she was unconscious?" Kry questioned as well.
"I... I remember now..." She gasped.

"I remember... one time... Captain Jack put me in a machine... that changed my memory... he changed it to murdering you Louise... even though sometimes... I was about to control myself... I'm sorry..." She whispered.
"Please... promise me... to... *cough*" She stopped.
"Tell me!" I screamed as a tear rolled down my cheek.
"To end... Captain Jack... but... not to... kill Undead..." She whispered.
Then her eyes closed.
More tears started to arrive.
"We must end Captain Jack right NOW!" Twage commanded.
He marched out of the room towards the exit.
We quickly followed him before he could leave us.
We then noticed him standing there outside.
I tapped his shoulder, wondering why he just froze like his battery just ran out.
"Umm... you alright?" I questioned.
He kept staring at something in the distance.
I stared closely in the distance as well...
Large stomps started to shake the trees in the distance...
The Shadow Beast started to march it's way towards us...
'The Shadow Beast has arrived...' I sensed Captain Jack's voice saying that.
To Be Continued...
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Its time...

Characters With Major Roles:
@LouiseXminerX
@Kryokin
@TwageTomato
@Sven007
@TheUndeadBrave
@CaptainJackValdy
And one more character is back...
Enjoy the final moment of The Eternal Shadow King - My 8th story.


The wind started to blow stronger, warning the surroundings that today maybe the last.
We all stood tall, trying to overcome our fear with might.
I noticed Kry with many weapons around his belt.
He caught what I was examining, indicating that we need those weapons.
He held the weapons, pulled them out of his belt then flung them at us.
I caught a sword, Agent S got a sniper rifle and Kry had a rifle.
The Shadow Beast stared at us with it's melting, deadly eyes and continued to march towards us.
I noticed Captain Jack also walking beside it as he smiled with his golden teeth.
He then finally reached us with the Shadow Beast meters away from us.
"Hello boys and girl. Behold, the Shadow Beast. The greatest invention of all I've created, to really show how powerful and intelligent I am instead of you, taking my dreams and goals showing how small and weak I am." Captain Jack said while he spitted on my face.
I rubbed my cheek, scrapping the spit and boogers off me.
"Surrender now and bow down to your new king. Otherwise I will command this beast to turn the last humans to Shadows. It's your only chance to live." He smiled.
"This deal seems cheesy. Your deals never seem to interest me. Louise, did you hear what he said? We're the last humans. We can't surrender now and let earth be controlled by these Shadows." Kry exclaimed.
I looked down, wondering if this deal is worthy enough.
Before I could decide a decision, Twage tried to shoot a glowing, yellow spell at him.
But the spell just went inside his crown, giving him more power.
"You see? Your weapons are useless. I'm giving you one more chance. Or this beast will put a deadline in your life." Captain Jack continued.

He's too strong... Twage's spell can't effect him and if we attack him, the Shadow Beast will be in the way...
"We surr-"
'Louise, a hero never backs down.'
I thought I was imagining things and tried to finish what I was about to say.
'You've saved the world many times... why not continue? That's what you were born to do.'
I recognized the voice...
'Nala?' I thought.
'Yes. It's me. Louise... I examined all your moves and decisions. All the choices you made resembles a hero. A true hero that won't throw their role away. You've defeated 8 Gods, 2 Giants, A dragon that controls time, a giant T Rex, A god Alien and even all of them at once. You've also defeated Satan and Hell. If you can defeat all of them... you can defeat Captain Jack and this beast.'
These words made me click.
'Alright Nala.' I thought.

"Louise? Hey? Why'd you like, just stop." Agent S questioned.
I shook my head to quit my day dreaming.
"Sorry... anyway." I said.
"We'll never bow down to you or this Beast. I have defeated many creatures stronger than this. So you should be the one bowing down to me." I said with my might.
"I understand..." Captain Jack sighed with disappointment.
His head then rose.
"Shadow Beast, their all yours." Captain Jack commanded.
The Shadow Beast marched forward faster, then shot it's hand to the ground in front of us.
Shadows then started to get released out of it's claws.
They scattered towards us.
I stabbed some Shadows while the rest used their weapons and spells towards them.
The Shadow Beast returned it's hand, then shot it's hand straight at Twage.
Twage tried to shoot his spells at the hand, but the hand zoomed straight past them.
His legs were caught and he was brought to the face of the beast.
Agent S tried to aim at the hand, but he kept missing the hand.
That's when we discovered the Shadow Beast had a mouth.
The Shadow Beast brought Twage closer to the mouth, about to get eaten.
Luckily, Twage had enough time to charge up a laser.
He closed his hands together, creating something bright in his hand.
When he opened his hand, it was released onto the Beast's eyes.
The Shadow Beast quickly threw Twage towards us before he could continue to harm it.

Twage landed right on Agent S, making Agent S then sob like... a girl...
"The eyes must be it's weakness!" Kry gasped with realization.
With that news, Agent S pushed Twage off his face and got his sniper.
He aimed, concentrated and pulled the trigger.
The bullet was released with such force and power.
We thought he aimed it perfectly, until we realized the Beast was in no pain.
"Must've hit it's shoulder... heh heh..." Agent S chuckled.
"Twage, got any spells to shoot at it's eye?" Kry questioned.
"My spells are regenerating, but one is ready to go. Hold still Louise." Twage said.
He closed his eyes, and a light blue smoke started to float in front of his forehead.
The smoke then floated towards my forehead.
Twage snapped his fingers, which made the smoke vanish.
I looked at myself. Nothing seemed to change. Did it not work?
"Just jump." Twage smiled.
I jumped, and turns out my jumps now make me float for as long as I want.
"You can fly now. Go towards it's eye and stick your sword in it!" Twage demanded.

I nodded and lifted myself up toward the Beast.
It tried to swing it's arms at me to make me go down, but my flying skills increased rapidly since I dodged all of it's attacks.
I eventually was right up to it's face.
I was about to stab it's eye, until something grabbed me.
It's slender claws wrapped around me.
I tried to cut it's fingers out, but my arms were also tucked into it's claws.
I was raised up, then swung to the ground.
Dust and dirt exploded around my face.
My friends helped me get up.
They asked me if I was okay like 10 times. I kept replying that I was fine.
I noticed all the shadowy tentacles of the Shadow Beast started to separate.
The tentacles on the ground split into Shadows.
The Shadows crawled closer.
Agent S and Kry shot bullets at them with their guns.
Some of them died, but there were so many, it looked like the guns were useless.
"Guys, run!" Agent S screamed.
We turned around and tried to go back into the fortress and lock the doors, until I fell on the ground.
I tried to grab the grass to stop the Shadows dragging me to the ground.
I stabbed the sword into the Shadows, making most of them disappear.
One was left, and I aimed my sword at it.

"STOP."
The voice was strong and startled my action.
"I told you to surrender."
I looked up. Captain Jack's annoyed face appeared.
"Look behind you to see what you have done."
I turned around, and all my friends were grabbed by Shadows.
"If you don't surrender, I'll make you turn into a Shadow. Then it's your friends turn. Bow down to me. I'm giving you one more chance." Captain Jack said.
"Please Louise! I want to live! I swear when I was a Shadow it was worst then being stuck in a toilet." Agent S sobbed.
I remembered Nala's words...
"We'll never surrender." I hissed.
"Then goodbye." Captain Jack said.
He walked off.
More Shadows joined in.
One grabbed my sword.
I tried to jump out, but the strength of all these Shadows was too much.
My head was just above the ground.
"LOUISE!" Kry shouted.
I looked at Kry, who looked so shocked.
"I'm sorry..." I whispered.
My head was then buried into the ground.

Darkness wrapped around my vision. Nothing was able to reach out.
"Louissssee..." Someone hissed.
It sounded just like the guy who keeps hissing at me whenever i went unconscious.
"Tell me your identity, NOW!" I shouted.
"It's me..."
"...Nala..."
"What?" I gasped.
"I keep hissing to hide my voice. But now I don't think it's worth it."
"Why did you keep saying my demon form was my future before?" I questioned.
"Because... that's who you are. A hero always has a rough start. You see... you were already born with demon blood. It wasn't active until the Gold Ore came and then enabled it." She explained.
"I was a demon this whole TIME?" I gasped.
"No. The demon blood you had in the past was too little. So you couldn't be considered a demon yet. But after those spiders in the cave put more demon blood into you and when you got the Gold Ore, that made you a true demon."
"What about the time when you told me I was going to have a reward while I had this demon curse." I questioned.
"You're going to know in a minute. Just listen. What I said in the past about this demon curse replacing your future was not true. Remember how I said Captain Jack replaced my mind? Those theories were said from my fake side. However, some of what I've said in the past is true. Listen Louise, I'll always guide you to victory. Just... you can't hurt Undead." She explained.
"Why?" I questioned.
"Because..."
Her voice faded off.
"Nala? NALA! COME BACK!" I shouted.
The darkness was still there.

After seconds, I kept hearing many sounds.
However, the sounds were like, blurry.
Until I saw light...
The sounds kept becoming clearer.
Then, everything was in place.
I opened my eyes and got up.
"This is impossible! How!!!"
I turned around. Captain Jack looked like he couldn't breathe for a day.
"Umm what happened exactly?" I questioned.
"You came back! You aren't a shadow!"
I turned around again.
My friends were still there, being grabbed by shadows.
"Maybe because of my Demon Curse..." I suggested.
"How are you sure?" Agent S questioned.
"It was my award..." I said as I thought of Nala's words.
"Shadows, kill them." Captain Jack commanded.
The Shadows then pushed them down to the ground.
They all screamed in fright.

Suddenly, my golden axes were back.
'This... this is also your award...' Nala whispered in my mind.
I was about to control myself. Rage and fear was no more.
I stabbed my axes at the Shadow, making them vanish in a blink of an eye.
I destroyed them all easily.
"ARG... That's it, Shadow Beast, destroy them!" Captain Jack shouted.
"Where's your weapons?" Twage asked Kry and Agent S.
"The Shadows must've taken them. Dang it!" Kry shouted.
"It's alright. I can take this beast by myself." I explained.
"What?" Agent S gasped.
I ran straight at the beast with all my energy.
I leaped forward and tried to cut the hips of the beast.
But... it did nothing.
I heard Captain Jack laugh in the background.
"Nala... how do I defeat it?" I whispered.
"Stab both of your axes on the ground!" I heard her command in my mind.
I was about to ask why, but the beast was about to grab me.
I stabbed both of my axes to the ground.
With the axe's nailed to the ground, the ground started to shake and rumble.
The ground started to create cracks.
Then, the cracks opened, creating a huge crack in the ground.
It was so big, you could probably fit a whole cruise in it.
The Beast fell straight into the crack.
I thought I was dreaming. These axes can't be this powerful...
"This curse... is who you are now. Your name will be known as a hero..." Nala whispered.
"Louise! HELP!" I heard Kry scream.
I turned around and ran back.
Undead was behind Kry with his arm around his neck.

"Kry will be dead if you keep ruining my dreams and goals. Stop this madness now or I'll command Undead to kill Kry and all your friends." Captain Jack hissed.
"Captain Jack. She's too powerful for you to take care of her. I'll destroy her for you." Undead said.
Captain Jack smiled.
"Fair enough." Captain Jack said.
"Fine. I'll face him if he let goes of my friends." I said.
Undead let go of Kry and my friends hid behind a tree and bush.
Undead spawned his golden axe and was ready to strike.
He leaped forward and stabbed his axe into the ground when I moved out of the way.
"I can't fight you." I said.
He hissed he tried to stab me again, but I just jumped out of the way.
"Your still my friend." I continued.
"YOU ARE NOT!" He shouted.
Out of no where, he cut my hip with his axe.
I went on the ground and held my hip tight.
I hissed in pain.
"I said... your not my friend. And I'll NEVER be your friend." He shouted.
The rage and fear started to come in.
I looked up and noticed he was aiming his axe about to kill me.
That's when rage took over.

I leaped up and kicked his axe.
I tried to slice him but he kept jumping backwards.
I leaped forward again and stabbed his shoulder.
Once he was down I cut his other shoulder.
"LOUISE! STOP!" I heard Nala scream in my head.
I didn't listen and kicked him in the stomach.
"Louise... wait... I'm... I'm..." He coughed.
I didn't want to hear more of his lies. He's done enough damage in my life.
I swung my axe at the side of his head. Blood spitted out of his head.
He fell on the ground.
"N-No!" Nala gasped in my head.
My axes disappeared and I turned to Captain Jack.
"It's over... I am powerful and devilish! With this curse, I'll continue to destroy your dreams!" I laughed.
"He he... ha ha! This was a part of my plan to tell you what you've just done." He laughed.
"Wha-what?" I said.
"Louise... you destroyed my promise!" Nala said.
I have just realized what I have done...
"I didn't want you to harm him... because... Captain Jack changed his mind too! This wasn't the real him! That's why he left his Shadow Potion and needle behind to help you. Right after you kicked him in the stomach, he was back... I realized that this curse is too powerful for you... you can't control it... I'm sorry..." Nala sobbed.

"Louise, don't you see? Now your a true murderer!" Captain Jack laughed.
"Wasn't she already one when she murdered your wife." Kry questioned.
"That wasn't her. That was the fake Louise. The fake Louise killed my wife. I commanded her to kill my wife! The whole fake adventure Agent S had was created by me!" Captain Jack explained.
Agent S jumped out of the tree.
"WHAT? You... you created my whole fake ADVENTURE?" Agent S gasped.
He nodded and laughed.
Twage was full of rage and shot a spell at him.
But the spell was just sucked into his crown.
I just killed a friend... who was innocent this whole time...
I thought I was a hero...
I looked at Captain Jack who kept laughing.
"Kry... you must replace me." I commanded.
"Wha-WHAT?" Kry gasped.
I charged at Captain Jack, pushing him back.
He kept stabbing his rod into my shoulder.
"I can't keep being a devil who can't even control her own LIFE!" I screamed.
"You can't defeat me... you'll have to die first!" Captain Jack shouted.
"That's what I'm doing..." I whispered.

Kry's View:
Louise kept charging into Captain Jack, and I realized she was heading straight to the huge crack she made.
"LOUISE! STOP!" I shouted.
I ran forward to try and stop Louise.
But it was too late.
I thought the world was then incomplete when I saw her jump off the cliff into the crack with Captain Jack in her arms.
Twage and Agent S followed me.
I looked over the cliff.
The distance was too far to see the bottom.
"She's dead..." Twage sniffed.
I thought my life just broke...
Without her... who will continue to save the world and be the true hero?
"Why did she do THAT! Was she crazy?" Agent S questioned.
"She couldn't continue to be a devil, and had to kill herself in order to kill Captain Jack... it was an action that the world will remember." I explained.
"No... SHE CAN'T BE DEAD!" Agent S cried.
Twage put his hand on Agent S's shoulder.
Then I noticed a paper on the ground.
I picked it up and had a name on it.
"This must be the name of the second hero..." I gasped.
I handed the paper to Twage and Agent S and they agreed.
"Well... adventures will never be put to an end. It's time to start a new one with a new hero." Agent S smiled.
I smiled too and stared in the distance.

We kept walking with wounds...
We kept smiling even with losses...
We kept remembering the gone...
We kept looking for a new beginning...
We will continue even with a new leader.
And those thoughts remained in my head while I remembered Louise.
The End.
The next story will be released in 2016 at the very start of January.
Thanks so much for reading this final chapter that means so much to me.
This story will always be remembered and I'll continue to create stories.
~LouiseXminerX. :)

 

Omg.... So beautiful :)
But I have to say: I imagined the story in my head, how it would look like. And it looked like good action :)
Keep on doing that!
-BrakeCrake

 

That was so amazing. Why you make me cry xd

 

I wish there was more! Your story has been amazing ever since the start, it's sad that you died though! I can't wait for your next story!!!

 

Why does my magic suck so much?

 

This was awesome! I'm excited for the next story! (Wish it was 2016!)

 

Good chap! :3





PS: I died.
PPS: Louise died.
PPPS: Sven lives. 0.0

 

He also sobs like a girl.

 

Wow. That chapter was awesome!
Sucks that I died though

 

Louise, can you spoil the name of the next story to spark the hype fire?

 

All of these are so cool! :D