The day my life changed forever

One day me and my friends flower and shoe where gonna go to the beach when we got there apparently the waves where 10 ft tall it was super scary when they crashed it sounded like some1 had shot a gun then shoe decited to go swimming I told him it was a bad a idea but he didn't listen so he ran in the water then flower was scared for him so she ran in then I figured I had no choice so I went in too then out of nowhere a 30 foot wave came for a second I thought I was dead then I relized I wasn't on earth I was somewhere else then a guy
With long bangs and fangs and he said u are the chosen ones I was confused flower almost wet herself and
Shoe was very interested anyway the guy said I was on Different planet and evil bad guy where gonna kill all
The aliens and they where called blargs and he said if we stoped the blargs he'd give us the whole planet I quickly relized this planet had very advanced technology and I relized the blargs where very strong and powerful so I made a plan and I almost stopped the blargs then relized the blargs where the good guys and the aliens I'm helping where using me to get rid of the blargs so the guys with the fangs could claim more land for themselfs so I said I wouldn't get rid of the blargs and instead I made them compromise and everything worked out

The end

 

seems legit

 

I couldn't read half of what you wrote ._. Ever heard of using punctuation?

 

ik i hav bad grammer esplally when i type cause i misspell alot and typeing on the ipad only makes it worse sorry :(

 

Having bad grammar is not an excuse. Grammar can be fixed.

 

>.>

 

Yeah dude totally reminds me of that day I drank lava. Did you know you can actually drink lava? But only once :)

 

This story is beautiful, almost as beautiful as Adrien Brody Himself. I could not come even close to the amazingness of this story. MLP is one of the few things as amazing as this.

 

Still a better love story than twilight

 

im glad u guys like it:)

 

my eyes hurt since i read this i dont even understand this the bad grammar work on it man dont type things on apple cuz apple is Shit (not really shit)

 

Android is better.

 

Yah ikr

 

No full stops??
Or any other punctuation either.
Good story though