My 8th Story: The Eternal Shadow King

Discussion in 'Creation Showcase' started by IAMINACTIVEBYE, Oct 11, 2015.

  1. IAMINACTIVEBYE

    IAMINACTIVEBYE Donator

    Messages:
    2,441
    Likes Received:
    3,786
    Yay! Just came back from the Gold Coast, and it's time for a new story! *Crowd says yay*

    So yes, this story will be linked to my 7th story. Now, I won't torture you and force you to read all 20+ chapters just to understand this story well, I'll just do a quick summary in the spoiler below of what happened in the last story.

    The underworld of earth is taking over. Demons spread onto the surface, killing humans and destroying the planet. Whenever I get angry, I turn into demon, grow demon wings and throw fire at all who threats me.
    We travel to hell, and defeat Satan, the king of Hell and ended him and destroyed Hell. Earth has not healed however and we have to fix it.
    Then one character realises we're just actors and sets off on his own adventure. Me and my friends still remain.

    So please, put you're hands together for the first chapter! *More yays*

    Starring:
    @LouiseXminerX
    @???
    @Kryokin

    Enjoy ^-^

    Chapter 1 - Amnesia

    ???'s View:
    "Now go!"
    It raised it's hand, pointing to the exit that was filled with light.
    "Let the legends come back to life."
    The hand flowed back into the shadows to disappear from human memory.
    I slowly walked towards the exit and a bright, morning sunrise was raised.
    I set off to find my new destiny.

    Louise's View:

    1 Week Later...
    It was dark and empty.
    Both my memory and view was the same.
    Everything was still and frozen, like time has stopped.
    Until, bright lights came out of the darkness and filled the emptiness.
    My eyes were open and was blurry at the start, but the view came in place.
    The room I was in was in was deep grey, and I appeared to be on the ground.
    My hands slowly pushed me up and I sat there, staring at the iron bars in front of me.
    The past has disappeared. The future will now replace it. I don't know my name, who I am, or anything that lurked in the past.
    I heard some steps.

    Immediately, I looked to my right, and noticed someone there, coming out of a hole.
    It was still quite dark, so the face was unknown.
    Suddenly, loud screams was heard down the hallways.
    Blood dribbled down the ground and flowed near where I sat.
    I looked at the figure again.
    "What the hell is going on..." I whispered.
    "There's no time. Get on your feet soldier." It commanded.
    It pushed me up and I got on my wobbly legs.
    I gained balance but then, the bars in front of my opened.
    They were pushed to the side and another dark figure was there, holding a knife.
    I took a couple of steps back, as it looked like it was about to throw the knife at me.
    The figure beside me leaped on it, trying to defend me.
    But the figure stabbed it's shoulder, making it fall down in pain.

    The figure emerged closer.
    It grabbed my throat, while I gasped.
    My vision was getting blurry, oxygen was no more.
    Then, just like 5 minutes ago, darkness.
    But the darkness fell away as soon as I heard a scream.
    My vision was back, and I soon the figure with a knife right in it's chest.
    The other figure that defended me before then pushed the other figure down some stairs, making it tumble down, onto the ground.
    I got out of the room and looked down. The figure was still.
    "Who are you?" I questioned.
    "Who am I? You're talking to yourself..." It sighed.
    "Let's hurry and get out of here. The whole world wants you dead." It explained.
    I followed it and went down the other stairs. He raised his hand, in a signal to stop.
    It looked around the corner and didn't make any signal to move.
    "Run." It whispered.
    I hesitated, confused by this command.
    "GO!" It shouted.
    I nodded, and ran down stairs.

    Flames on the walls grew and bloomed, crushing the building.
    Dead bodies in prisoner clothes laid on the ground.
    Everything was wild. Everything was a sign of death.
    I kept running, not looking back, wondering about the other guy. Why did he want me to run in the first place? Is there other enemies looking for me?
    Suddenly I stopped.
    On the ground, deep, dark shadows crawled towards me...
    No one else is here. If no one is here except for me, who's shadow is this?
    It was chaos.
    Then a shadow reached out it's hand and grabbed my leg and tried to pull me into the ground.
    I gasped, almost screaming as the cold hands brought my deeper.
    More hands grabbed my legs and I was about to fall into the ground.

    I heard loud foot steps beside me.
    A lady in police officer clothes stood there and tried to shoot the shadows near me with it's gun.
    The shadows near me started to let go of me, but more shadows came in to help and grab me.
    Other shadows grabbed the police officer.
    "ARG! HELP! WHAT ARE THESE THINGS?" She screamed.
    Then, her body disappeared into the ground, leaving her gun next to me.
    I saw her body underground, and realised she turned into a shadow too.
    I reached forward, grabbing the gun and used the gun to shoot all the shadows.
    They finally disappeared and I was flung into the air, back onto the ground.
    In the distance, an exit sign... an escape!
    I was almost out of breath, but I was desperate and forced my legs to run even more.
    I opened the doors and I was outside.
    But I heard more screams behind me. I looked up.
    The whole place was blooming in flames... what about that guy I met?
    But then, inside I saw the shadows, crawling towards me.

    I was out of breath as my legs felt weak.
    Suddenly, something made me jump and fall as a sudden noise croaked behind me.
    I looked up, someone on a horse was there.
    "Get on! I'm on you're side." It said.
    It raised it's hand to help me get up.
    I looked back at the building and back at the stranger.
    The shadows crawled closer.
    I grabbed it's hand and hopped on the horse.
    The horse ran with all it's energy, away from the building.
    "What are those things... those shadows." I gasped.
    "I'll explain everything to you later, Louise." It said.
    "W-who?" I gasped.
    "You have amnesia... well you're name is Louise, and I'm now known as Kry. I used to be known as Kono but I have to change my name and identity because the world wants us both dead." Kry explained.
    I nodded as the horse galloped more.
    "Where are we going by the way?" I questioned.
    "To you're new home. Don't worry, when we get there, all of you're questions will be answered." Kry smiled.
    To Be Continued...
    So yay for the first chapter of this story! Woo.
    Oh yes, this chapter is a reference to the beginning of Metal Gear Solid 5 The Phantom Pain.
    Right now I'm trying to fit many characters who have already requested to be in the story, so please be patient if you want to be in the story. Once I fit all that requests, then I'll open any more requests to be in this story.
    Thanks For Reading!!! :D
     
  2. TwageTomato

    TwageTomato Former Mod Donator

    Messages:
    977
    Likes Received:
    1,413
    Minecraft:
    Twage
    Yay :D
    More story time with Louise!
    *All the children gather around to listen*
     
    IAMINACTIVEBYE likes this.
  3. Abcdhax

    Abcdhax good times

    Messages:
    1,405
    Likes Received:
    534
    Minecraft:
    SqueakerSquad
    Who is @???
     
  4. TwageTomato

    TwageTomato Former Mod Donator

    Messages:
    977
    Likes Received:
    1,413
    Minecraft:
    Twage
    A person who, in the plot for the time being, has remained anonymous for reasons of the plot, but whose name was listed as being unknown to signify that the unnamed character is different and separate from the others already revealed.
     
  5. IAMINACTIVEBYE

    IAMINACTIVEBYE Donator

    Messages:
    2,441
    Likes Received:
    3,786
    I hope you enjoyed the 1st chapter c: Now lets hope you enjoy this chapter as well.
    Starring:
    @LouiseXminerX
    @Kryokin
    New Character:
    @TwageTomato
    Enjoy ^-^

    Chapter 2 - The Shadows
    As the horse galloped towards the sunset, so many questions flooded my brain.
    "Who made those shadows? Why was I in jail? Who was that-"
    "Patience Louise, we're almost there." Kry said.
    I felt like he was avoiding my questions, but he did have to concentrate, so I left him be.
    Kry looked behind himself and looked past me.
    I did as well, and noticed something crawling on the ground.
    "Snap, there back. Louise, shoot those shadows for me." Kry commanded.
    He passed me a gun and I held it tight.
    I held the shotgun, aimed it and shot a shadow. It disappeared and vanished as grey smoke grew as it died.
    However, that was just one shadow. There were like over 20 chasing us, and they were speeding up.
    I keep shooting as the noise of the gun shooting were crushing my ears.
    It was scaring the horse, making it slow down and stopped as it looked around with caution.
    "GO! Don't worry girl, keep going!" Kry shouted.
    But the horse was too afraid as I kept shooting.
    I quit shooting so the horse could calm down, but I should have kept shooting, because the shadows now caught us.
    The shadow's slender arms grabbed one of the horse's legs, making it fall.
    We jumped off it. I tried to shoot the shadows who were grabbing the leg, but the amount of shadows seemed to be eternal, and soon the horse disappeared, erased from human memory.
    It then formed a mutant body and was in a dark colour, then galloped towards us, about to join the shadow army as they unite to kill us.

    We looked at each other, and when our eyes met, we knew exactly what we were thinking.
    We looked behind us and ran like machines.
    However, we should have ran a lot earlier, because a shadow grabbed my leg, making me fall.
    Kry looked at me and grabbed my arm, trying to pull me out of the slivered hands of the shadow.
    But another shadow grabbed Kry's leg too, so he fell.
    "Where's the gun I gave you?" Kry questioned with a mighty voice.
    I looked around, and I just saw the gun get yanked by a shadowy hand.
    We were going deeper into the ground as our heads were the only things above ground.
    But then, a glowy light, like a laser shot the shadows around us, making them vanish into grey smoke.
    We got flung in the air and landed on our heads.
    We got up, and saw a figure in front of us in some sort of wizard costume.
    "Kono... I mean, Kry. Still getting used to the name, lel. Anyway, Kry, thank goodness you made it out alive and got Louise." It said.
    "Good'ay mate. I'm Twage. I like tomato's. Yum. Anyway, I was your friend a long time ago. When we go in our base, I'll tell you what happened when we got separated." Twage explained.
    "Se-separated?" I gasped.
    "Indeed. you were separated by all of your friends. Including me, Twage and many more that are missing right now. Let's go to the base now before more shadows come." Kry explained.

    We walked a couple more metres until we saw a giant rock.
    "This is our home!" Twage cheered.
    "So... we live under a rock?" I sighed.
    "Yeah. I'm a starfish actually. I like rocks." Twage giggled.
    Before I could feel disgusted by this guy, Kry did a great laugh.
    "Don't believe him Louise, he can be a bit of a real tomato at times. Anyway, this isn't our new home..." Kry laughed.
    Kry went over to a tree and grabbed a stick and bent it down.
    The rock slid to the right, and a hole with vines and dirt inside appeared.
    "... THIS is our new home. Don't be freaked out by the spiders inside. We just found this place. I'm sure you can help decorate this place." Kry said.

    We went inside as bugs slid around the place, making Twage scream every second.
    "I wish you had a spell that would make you shut up for days..." Kry sighed.
    "Hey, I hate bugs okay? When we clean this place up, then I'll be a great man. Like my daddy... who was turned into a tomato by me. Ehh..." Twage sighed.
    "Man, I'm glad I don't remember you being this weird." I sighed, as Kry laughed after me.
    We then were standing in front of an iron door with many locks on it.
    "I will now say the secret word to open this..." Twage said, getting ready to say the secret word.
    "Open." Twage said in a mighty voice.
    The locks moved out of the way and opened the door, and inside was... quite cool actually.
    [​IMG]
    "We're still trying decorating this place. We have a bedroom with a computer in it right now. You can sleep in it. Also clothes you can wear too to replace the ugly prisoner suit you have on." Kry explained.
    I looked down, and I was wearing a black and white suit. Yeah, I really did look ridiculous.
    So I went in the room Kry told me about and opened a wardrobe.
    I saw a red T Shirt with a grey, giant stripe going from one corner to the other. Also dark grey pants and a grey hat with a headset on it too.
    "You like?" Someone said.
    I gasped and almost had a heart attack, and I saw the prickly face of Twage.
    "These were the clothes you used to have until you disappeared. We found these back in Hell. Ehh." Twage said.
    Before I could take my clothes off and try on my new clothes, I realised Twage was in the corner, staring at me.
    "Ahem, do you mind?" I coughed.
    "Oh, yeah. Sorry. *cough*." Twage awkwardly said.
    He went out of the room and I changed into the new clothes.
    These fit me so well and were really awesome.

    I went out and saw Kry and Twage near a table, sitting drinking some tea.
    "It really suits you Louise. Well, it always suited you." Kry smiled.
    I sat on a stone chair and drank the tea.
    "How was I separated by you guys..." I questioned.
    "Okay. When you woke up in the hospital after a 9 year coma, you went in someone's and I's house. However, then some people broke and beat us up until we fainted. When we woke up, we were in jail. Agent S however was missing, he could have escaped on his own though. We then escaped though thanks to Twage who we met in the jail who was also beat up by those guys. However, you ran away for a bit, quite mad actually. You disappeared for so long... and we didn't find you for a year until this day." Kry explained.

    Just then, we heard the door open.
    "Someone figured out the secret code to open that door!" Twage gasped.
    "Of course they would have! Why did you set the password for that? Everyone could guess that you blockhead!" Kry shouted.
    A tall figure walked towards us. It breathed heavily.
    We got out of our seats, stood still as we were in shock.
    To Be Continued...
    Please keep up the support guys c:
    Leave your comments, likes or even suggestions below!
    Thanks For Reading!!! :D
     
  6. TwageTomato

    TwageTomato Former Mod Donator

    Messages:
    977
    Likes Received:
    1,413
    Minecraft:
    Twage
    Louise. The references. Plz. It's too much.
    Anywho, yay more story time! Also yay magik! Also yay secret underground cave homes! Boo giant tall spooky intruders!
     
    IAMINACTIVEBYE likes this.
  7. xHazza

    xHazza

    Messages:
    314
    Likes Received:
    128
    gj
     
    IAMINACTIVEBYE likes this.
  8. LadyGaga

    LadyGaga The cake isn't a lie Donator

    Messages:
    409
    Likes Received:
    538
    Minecraft:
    Svexellent
    I feel a comeback...
     
    IAMINACTIVEBYE likes this.
  9. IAMINACTIVEBYE

    IAMINACTIVEBYE Donator

    Messages:
    2,441
    Likes Received:
    3,786
    Much story. #Shadows. Good cave. Wizard is good. Much wow. Doge approves.

    Everyone say yay for the 3rd chapter :D *Yay*

    Starring:
    @LouiseXminerX
    @Kryokin
    @TwageTomato
    New Characters:
    @Sven007 (Welcome back!)
    Annnnnnnd @TheUndeadBrave ! (Who has been in almost every story I have made up to date. Congratz c:)
    Enjoy ^-^

    Chapter 3 - The Shadow King
    It breathed heavily, until it finally spoke.
    "Wait... who are you?" It said.
    It came closer, examining my face and body.
    "Those clothes... that face... no... this is a dream." It continued.
    It took a couple of steps back.
    "Just spit out who you are. I hate waiting." Twage shouted, cutting out the silence.
    "I'm... I'm known as Agent S... but this girl... is that who I..." He gasped.
    Twage started to face palm himself due to the patience of his starting to beat him down.
    Agent S then knelled down on both knees.
    He grabbed both of my arms. I was so confused.
    "Louise... yes! It's Louise! Your not a fake!" He cheered with joy.
    "A... a fake? Theres another one of me?" I gasped.
    "The adventures we had... those were fake... it was a scene! Louise, we were in Hell together and defeated Satan! Until I realised you and your friends were fakes..." He explained.
    "Who are you?" I said.
    I saw his face. His face changed into an emotion like a broken heart.
    "Wait... is that you? Kono and Twage!" He screamed with more joy.
    "Shh, it's Kry. Not Kono. Arg these people need to learn!" Kry shouted.
    "Well whatever... I thought you guys were fakes too!" He cheered.
    "But... are you guys fakes TOO?" Agent S started to panic as he took a couple of steps back.

    "I'm sure we're not fakes... I mean I hope we aren't..." Kry said.
    Then we heard someone tumbling down behind Agent S.
    Someone face planted there head in the dirt right behind the iron door.
    It got up and entered.
    "Un-UNDEAD? HOLY THE WHOLE TEAM IS BACK!" Agent S was jumping like a trampoline.
    "Agent S? Louise? Kono? Twage? I thought I never saw you guys again..." It said.
    "Okay hold up, my brain is tied in knots right now. Who are you Mr Undead I think. What is heck are these fakes are you talking about, and this 'defeating Satan' thing." I sneered.
    Kry went over and whispered to Agent S and Undead.
    "She's got amnesia? Shame..." Undead whispered, loud enough I could hear.
    They turned around and saw me.
    "Louise... I was in a different adventure accidentally. I was in an adventure where the fake you was in Hell. You guys were in the adventure too. I thought you turned into a demon minded girl before. Until someone said all of you were just actors... I'm sure your the real ones, I know it!" Agent S explained.
    "What about you Undead?" I questioned.
    "Me? Well... I came back to life some how. I'm sure Twage resurrected too. We were taken by some thieves and met the Shadow King. Then we-"
    "The Shadow King?" I interrupted what Undead could say.
    "Indeed. Known to be the one to make all these Shadow things to exist. Such an evil soul to exist in this world." Undead continued.
    Agent S then did a high pitched scream, almost making our ears fall out.
    "Calm your screams. You sound like a girl..." Twage hissed.
    Agent S pointed at the entrance. Some thieves in sneaking suits arrived.

    Kry ran to a wardrobe and grabbed some weapons.
    "Oy, take these. Kill them! They look like the same ones who captured all of us before!" Kry shouted.
    I got a rifle while the others got guns as well.
    I pulled the trigger, and tried to aim at the thieves, but they were so fast, like ninjas.
    And just before we could realise where they went, they were behind us.
    They grabbed us and put their arm around our necks.
    I looked at Agent S, who got shot in the head with a gun.
    No blood or anything came out of his head. His eyes just closed... perhaps asleep.
    The rest of my friends were also put to sleep, and in a heart beat, so was I.

    "We brought them, your highness..."
    "Put them in jail. Except for this one..."
    "Reason your highness?"
    "I know that face. Full of guilt. Put her in court."
    The voices rung in my head, unknown to just be imaginations or reality voices.
    I heard a hammer slam, waking me up immediately.
    I looked up, and I seemed to be tied to a chair. Crowds of people shouted and chat.
    Some of them even threw bottles at me, hitting my face and arms.
    Then a hammer slammed again.
    "ORDER! Order in this court!" I heard.
    I looked up. Someone with a white wig holding a hammer was sitting.
    "Excuse me sir... but where am I?" I whispered.
    "Your in court. Now SILENCE!" He screamed in my ear.
    "Reason for putting me in court?" I rudely said.
    He then pointed in a direction.
    I saw someone with a black crown to my right a couple of feet away.

    "Court will now start. King Shadow, your statement." The judge said.
    The guy with the black crown stood up.
    "This woman is known to be the murderer of my wife!" He shouted.
    The crowd quietly chatted.
    "Do you have any evidence?" The judge questioned.
    "Indeed." He took out a tape.
    "This tape is a recording from a security camera. It shows her murdering my wife with her own claws!" It said.
    "Is anyone else responsible or a part of this crime as well?" The judge questioned.
    "Yes. These guys were friends with this criminal!"
    He pointed to a cage next to me that has been brought me.
    The people inside woke up.
    My friends...
    "Arrgg... my head... what's going on?" Undead questioned.
    "I have no idea..." I said.
    "SILENCE!" The judge slammed its hammer.
    "I suggest her and her friends punishment should be..."
    The Shadow King got out a black rod with a red jewel on top of it.
    "...turned into SHADOWS!" He shouted.
    The crowd cheered and roared, and we were confused but frightened.
    "ORDER! Order in this court. The evidence is clear. I claim these people GUILTY!" The judge slammed its hammer.
    The people roared louder with joy. Some people then cut the ropes tied to my hands and legs, but grabbed me.
    The cage doors opened, but many other people grabbed them.

    "Take them to the SHADOW CHAMBER!" The Shadow King laughed.
    "I am not guilty! I have done no crime in my LIFE!" I screamed.
    "Tell it to the judge." The Shadow King sneered, waving the tape in his hand in my face.
    We were then taken into a jail, with many crazy people jumping around in their cells.
    "HEY? Have you got some flesh I could eat... I'm STARVING!" One of them hissed.
    We then stood in front of the last cell, with no bars. Instead a giant window showing the room.
    We looked carefully through the windows. The cell was filled with shadows.
    "What-What happens when we go in there?" Agent S questioned with fright.
    "The shadows will bring you down to the ground, and turn you into shadows as well. Legends say once you become a shadow... you'll never be the same." A guy who was grabbing my arms laughed.

    They opened a iron door, and we were pushed inside.
    They closed the door immediately.
    The shadows in front of us turned slowly towards us...
    All of the weapons we had before were taken.
    "Enjoy the ride! Your in for a surprise... HAHAHAHAHA!" Some loud speakers inside shouted, sounding like the Shadow King guy...
    To Be Continued...
    Theres room for more characters in this story! Feel free to ask to be in the story and I'll try and add you in as soon as possible.
    Remember to also leave your lovely comments, like and suggestions too.
    And sometimes some mistakes can be found. Let me know if you do spot any!
    Thanks For Reading!!! :D
     
  10. LadyGaga

    LadyGaga The cake isn't a lie Donator

    Messages:
    409
    Likes Received:
    538
    Minecraft:
    Svexellent
    yay for the new chapter. I said it, now I want a sticker...
     
    IAMINACTIVEBYE likes this.
  11. TwageTomato

    TwageTomato Former Mod Donator

    Messages:
    977
    Likes Received:
    1,413
    Minecraft:
    Twage
    YAY NEW CHAPTER! Question: What is casting the shadows? Surely the shadows are being made by something blocking a light source. Does the King's staff create them? Does he have the supernatural ability to sustain and control the shadows by his will? Can he control the mundane shadows of other people? Is his crown made out of shadows? Do I get a cookie for cheering for the chapter? Why did Kono change names to Kry? Can I turn evil in this story when/if I become a shadow? If everyone from hell were fakes, where were the real ones and what were they doing? Am I asking too many questions? Hi? Is Agent S a fake and lying about the rest of them being fakes to hide his own fakeness? How tall is the Shadow King? Where was Louise's attorney? Where was the Jury? And finally, "I saw someone with a black crown..." ROLL CREDITS!
     
  12. TheUndeadBrave

    TheUndeadBrave Life's too short, make the most of it!

    Messages:
    808
    Likes Received:
    319
    Minecraft:
    TheUndeadBrave
    Where did I come from?
     
    IAMINACTIVEBYE likes this.
  13. LadyGaga

    LadyGaga The cake isn't a lie Donator

    Messages:
    409
    Likes Received:
    538
    Minecraft:
    Svexellent
    I can say this: I'M NOT FAKE!!
     
  14. Abcdhax

    Abcdhax good times

    Messages:
    1,405
    Likes Received:
    534
    Minecraft:
    SqueakerSquad
    Where's me
     
  15. IAMINACTIVEBYE

    IAMINACTIVEBYE Donator

    Messages:
    2,441
    Likes Received:
    3,786
    Most of your questions will be answered in the future of the story.
    However, I will answer a couple of them:

    Kono changed his name to Kry because the Shadow King wanted Kono to die due to being my friend because the Shadow King thinks I killed his wife as seen in court. So Kono changed his identity to Kry so the Shadow King won't know its him so he can kill him.

    Agent S was the only one who wasn't fake in the last story. Some of the characters in the last story don't exist, just fakes. While Agent S was in a fake adventure created by an unknown person, in Chapter 2 it explained that when I went to Agent S (before Agent S went on that fake adventure) and Kono's house then got caught by theives. Me and Kry was brought to jail but Agent S escaped and accidentally went on an another adventure with fakes. In jail I got so mad, I got a demon mind (In the last story on the last chapter, I get a demon mind whenever I get mad) so I escaped somehow and disappeared for a year. What happened to Kry is a mystery and what happened to Undead and you is too. Some characters not mentioned yet can actually exist. The only things I will say aren't real is my dog Sandy, Hell and Satan. Those were made up fakes.
    Agent S is not a fake btw. Even if he is lying, he would have been gone right now like the other fakes.

    If you become a shadow, you will get a dark mind that only tries to turn everything into a shadow. In the next chapter you may or may not become a shadow due to the situaction we are in right now (We're in a room with shadows right now btw)

    And don't worry, answering questions if fun (Except if they are about MATHS!) . Feel free to ask anything confusing if you want about this story. Nothing complex though cause that may take quite a lot of thinking time for me!

    The Shadow King's height is quite taller then all of us, this picture will probably explain:
    upload_2015-10-19_17-21-36.png
    The shadow king does not exactly look like that. He does have the stick he's holding with the red gem on it, the black crown and a long black cape, but he does not have black skin. I kept the face and rest of the body unknown.

    I don't really understand some of the questions you have asked though, but hopefully some of them will be answered through out the story. Thanks c:

    You are in the story all ready actually. But the readers do not know which character you are. Later in the story your identity will be revealed. Do not panic :) I didn't forget about you.
     
  16. CaptainJackValdy

    CaptainJackValdy I got a plan to save the server, just have faith

    Messages:
    2,739
    Likes Received:
    4,657
    Minecraft:
    CaptainJackValdy
    Seriously, These stories are damn great but I didn't expect just that just me disappearing for a while because of high school will remove me from the "Story's evil" throne. Fix pls.
    (8th story!!!?? Good Job)
     
    IAMINACTIVEBYE and LadyGaga like this.
  17. Rob

    Rob Donator

    Messages:
    1,650
    Likes Received:
    7,823
    Minecraft:
    unpay
    These are too amazing that I just can't, handle it. Great job!
     
    IAMINACTIVEBYE likes this.
  18. IAMINACTIVEBYE

    IAMINACTIVEBYE Donator

    Messages:
    2,441
    Likes Received:
    3,786
    I can add you in the story btw in the future. I already have an important role for you if you do choose to be a part of this story... c:


    Starring:
    @LouiseXminerX
    @Kryokin
    @TwageTomato
    @Sven007
    @TheUndeadBrave
    Enjoy ^-^

    Chapter 4 - Calling To The Night
    The shadows slivered towards us, raising their hands out, ready to grab us into the shadowy deep of below.
    Agent S hugged Undead with fright, making Undead just frown from annoy.
    Kry looked at me, wondering if I knew what to do.
    My mind was empty. Nothing was a sign of living.
    We were doomed.
    We all took a couple of steps back, then pushed our backs against the wall.
    "May we rest in peace, friends..." Undead sighed.
    We prepared for the day no one wanted to come.
    We closed our eyes, scrunched up our fists, waiting for the days to be over.
    I felt someone grabbing my leg, then I was dragged down.

    Giant sounds of glass shattering made us all flick our eyes open.
    Someone has broken in.
    They had a rifle, and shot all the shadows.
    However, we were getting deeper. Soon our waists were in the ground.
    Bullets shot the shadows grabbing us. Soon there were no more to be seen.
    We were flung into the air, then back on the ground.
    I got up quickly, curious about this figure.
    I saw the figure. It stood there.
    It was about to say something, but it was then grabbed by someone.
    The Shadow King was back.
    "How dare you try to escape the darkness! You shall suffer more and not be remembered!" He shouted.
    He then raised his rod thing, with a red jewel on it.
    He pointed the red jewel in front of him, then zapped red lightnings onto the ground.
    More shadows were born as they expanded into fully grown, crawly creatures.
    He then quickly disappeared... turning into dust with the guy.

    I realised the figure who saved us before dropped his gun.
    The shadows were just behind it, about to grab it.
    I ran forward, slid on my stomach and grabbed it.
    Before the shadows could pull me down, I shot them all with the rifle.
    They all disappeared, leaving a signal for everyone to escape the horror of this place.
    We ran out and realised more shadows has spawned.
    I pulled the trigger, but the gun just made a 'click' noise.
    I once more pulled the trigger. Still clicking.
    I threw the gun at the shadows with frustration. They just grabbed it and brought it down to the ground.

    I just noticed a glowing light near me.
    I looked at the person to my left. Twage was charging up something in his hand...
    Some orb with lightnings of purple surrounded a floating sphere.
    "I cannot use this spell much, it drains so much energy from me... I can only use it in emergencies... hopefully this works..." Twage sighed.
    Once the orb seemed complete, he raised his hand and threw the orb of lightning at the Shadow.
    The orb spread out and seeded giant, wild lightnings on all the shadows.
    The shadows slowly shrink. Their huge claws grew tiny and then they were gone.
    The arms evaporated, the bodies, then the head.
    They were gone.
    Just before we could thank Twage, he fell on the ground, breathing heavily.
    "He cannot use that spell again even if our live depend on it." Kry said while frustrated.
    "Why not? He can save us from, like everything!" Agent S said.
    "Look at him. That spell could have ended him. It's too dangerous. He must learn how to control it more before he can use it once more. We can't loose an important person on our team. Undead, carry him. Let's go." Kry commanded.
    Undead sighed and picked Twage up.
    Twage's eyes were twitching with fright with his mouth open, breathing so much he was like a machine on full blast.
    Kry was right. We cannot risk him using that spell again.

    We exited the jail and we were on a field of grass.
    The sun has just fell, letting the moon slowly raise to replace the sun.
    Just then, in front of us, shadows grew from the ground by their selves.
    "They are born from darkness... our cave has no light in it! We must light it with torches before it becomes a new base for Shadows!" Undead realised.
    So we turned around and ran into the forest.
    Wolves howled in the distance as owls called for their close ones.
    It was so dark, we could hardly see.
    "Arg, does it usually get this dark at night? It's almost like we are under a black blanket!" Undead hissed.
    "I'm not sure..." I said with wonder.
    "We need to make torches before we enter our homes. Everyone, find wood, flint and steel. GO!" Undead commanded.
    We nodded and split up.
    I pulled some bark off a tree.
    Then I heard someone screaming with fear.
    I ran and followed the noise, then saw someone with an steel sword, trying to defend itself from some shadows.
    It then noticed me.
    "Please! Help ME!" It shouted.
    But then the shadows grabbed his legs and pulled him to the ground.
    It's body then changed and mutated. It grew large claws and long arms. It became one of them.
    However, the iron sword was still on the ground, up for grabs.
    I ran towards and grabbed it, but the shadows grabbed me too.

    I stabbed the sword into the ground, killing most of the shadows.
    I got out of the ground while more shadows crawled towards me.
    As I ran back, I noticed my friends all meeting up.
    I joined the group and listened to what they were argueing about.
    "There is not steel or flint here! We can't make any source of light here!" Undead shouted.
    "Well we are not going back to our home without it!" Kry hissed.
    Then Agent S noticed what I was holding.
    "Guys, we just need to find one more thing. Look." Agent S exclaimed, while pointing at the wood and steel sword I was holding.
    "Nice job Louise. But we still need to find flint..." Undead sighed.
    Twage then gasped, like he just woke up.
    "I... I remember! There's flint in the entrance of the cave!" Twage gasped.
    "How are you so sure? It's hard to see the difference between stone and flint..." Undead sighed.
    Twage got on his feet, and looked like he just found the answer to everything.
    "I am sure!" Twage shouted.
    "But your memory can sometimes be a potato Twage. How do we know your just imagining things. Besides, there will be shadows near the flint that your talking about too. We have to find flint somewhere else!" Kry shouted.
    "Louise, your the boss. Should we go in our home to see if Twage is true, or go and try and find flint somewhere else while our home starts to spawn more shadows... Twage can have a weird memory, but sometimes he can be trustworthy..." Agent S sighed.
    This decision depended on everyone. Without a home, the shadows would find us, and even the Shadow King too. If we go back to our home, there will be shadows there and possibly not even flint too. What should I do...
    To Be Continued...
    Okay. So what do you choose? Should we go in the cave and see if theres flint in it or go and find our own flint. PM or comment below what road I should take!
    If no one decides, the next chapter will be delayed. If no one still doesn't decide, I'll have to decide myself.
    So leave your comments, likes and suggestions below or any questions too! :D
    Thanks For Reading!!! :D
     
  19. LadyGaga

    LadyGaga The cake isn't a lie Donator

    Messages:
    409
    Likes Received:
    538
    Minecraft:
    Svexellent
    Why not both? 1 team goes in the cave and the other team searches own flint.
     
  20. TwageTomato

    TwageTomato Former Mod Donator

    Messages:
    977
    Likes Received:
    1,413
    Minecraft:
    Twage
    I know I'm right. I always am. We should go to the cave.

    *gets us all killed*