Mystery of the Dark house. (13+)

Hi.

Before you start reading this, It's not the best story, nor Is It real.

This Is a fictional horrific story written by me. It might not be perfect. but please be nice.

WARNING : Some of you MAY Imagine things after reading a story of any kind, so read this at your own risk.

I am not responsible for anything.

Note : I will not accept any tips. As I am already working hard on this, I don't want anyone to say "Change the text so It can be readable".

And please be patient for the next chapters! It's not easy to make this!

Special thanks for PyroMancer, Heatdude and EpicTNTArrow for the Inspiration! Thanks guys!

Enjoy!
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1993, January 14. ​

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It was a dark , cold and rainy night.

As the young 14 year old boy, Josh, was working on his history assignment, he felt something.

Like a ghost or spirit was watching him, as In behind him, disappearing and hiding In his room.
As he Is frightened by the abandoned mansion Infront of his house, but, Is he Imagining It, or Is It something actually haunting him?

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8:15 PM, January 14.​

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*Josh's mother knocks Into his door*
The mother comes In a concerned face.


"Josh, did you finish your assignment? It's almost your bed time!" Said the Mother.

As the boy didn't answer he question, she asks him again, as he still doesn't answer, she closes his curtains and yells at him In a loud high voice.

"Josh, I am very angry at you! Stop looking at the window and finish your homework Immediately!"
Said the Mother In an angry voice.


"Mom.. I don't feel very well." Said the boy.

His mother calmed down, and asked him In a calm voice, asking him what Is wrong?

"Honey, Is there something wrong? Ever since we moved here, you don't seem to be In a good mood."
Said the mother, In a worried voice.

The boy Is Imagining a spirit or ghost haunting him, but he didn't think his house was haunted, but the abandoned mansion that Is exactly Infront of his family's house. He didn't want to tell his mother or father. As he thinks they will send him to a Child Psychologist for check Ins.

As the boy knows there Is nothing he can do to hide It forever, he decides to tell his mother about the abandoned mansion.

"Mom, ever since we moved here, I was excited. Until I saw the abandoned mansion. It's.. just.. making me crazy! I feel like something Is watching him.. something dark from the mansion. Just haunting me! I know that house Is haunted!"
Said the boy In a frightened and sad voice.

As the mother heard everything, she began thinking he was crazy. He knew that she wouldn't understand him.. his mom told him to finish his homework and doesn't want to hear anything about It.

As she closes the door, a shadow comes behind him. As the boy was writing his assignment.. He froze for a second with fear and chills. He picked up the knife.. he thought he was gonna attack. But he passed out.. He heard a scary whisper, any crazy man would say. But.. In a different way, crazier than Jeff the killer.

"I see... dead people".
The Ghost, 1993.

20 Years Later.​

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2013, October 23.


The story about the crazy boy Imaging the ghost In 1993 still existed. The family has gotten killed, people don't know It was the ghost, they then claimed the house was the "Murderer's living".

But a family from Eastern Colorado have gotten to a new house. As a celebration for the eldest child for Graduating In the Eastern Colorado University, the mother has baked a chocolate cake, she knew It was his favorite flavor.

"Son, I am very proud of you, You are educated, and I am sure that you're ready for your future!"
Said the father, In a proud and happy voice.

"Honey, even though you will get a Job and raise a family, even If I'm old and you're 30 years old, I will still love you."
Said the mother, In a sad and proud voice.


The eldest child almost had tears In his eyes, even though he Is 19-2o years old.

"Thanks Mom, dad and siblings! I want to thank you all, If It wasn't for--"
The family was quiet for a second as they had a one-second-blackout.

"I'll call an engineer to fix this. Congratulations son! Anyways, Come on, Young son. Go get your bag and get ready for school"
Said the father In a happy voice.

As the boy was walking to the bus stop, He stopped.
An old man stepped In his way, telling him about the story of the crazy boy.
The abandoned mansion was still there, and the engineer got Inside the mansion after he was done telling him about the story.


The boy was confused, as the house looked exactly like the current house Infront of his house.
But It was destroyed. But the mansion In the present now Is fixed. But It's abandoned.

Here Is the picture of It from the 1910's :



As the boy went Inside the bus station to throw away the picture, no one was Inside, and as he heard a whisper..

"I see... dead people."
Ghost, 2013.

The boy knew.. It was the end of his life.

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Chapter 2 Coming soon! I just need to brainstorm Ideas.

Plot twist!

Where do you think the boy In 2013 lived at? And was that the same ghost? And why was the house fixed In 2013 while It used to be destroyed?

Give me answers below!
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AWESOME can't wait for chapter 2!

 

Great job Xadiax! Spooooooky

 

I have to check my pants cuz I think I just peed them on the first word. ( jk )

good story btw

 

Ermahgerd Its So Good Read The Whole Thing Pwease Make More :3 :D

 

Chapter 2 Is coming soon.

:)

 

Meh, i didnt get scared at all, and im 12, but awesome story!

AM I EMOTIONLESS?!?!

Now im terrified