The Grim Reaper and the Carnival. (A story by Shadow_Riolu)

Story removed. Parents restriction.

 

Sorry for the double-post, but I can't post more than 10,000 characters, so I would like to tell you that normally I would have something like:

Blah blah blah
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*Switch to _____ P.O.V.
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Blah blah blah

But of course, it was a little too much and I couldn't post it.
Once again, sorry for the double-post, but I blame the 10,000 character limit.
For that, it was actually shortened. If it weren't for the 10,000 character limit, this would be twice as long and more elaborate. :3

Also, tell me what you thought in the comment section! I appreciate all feedback, whether they be negative, so I know what I can improve, or if it is just praise. Thanks all for taking your time to read this. Also, if you could give an explanation as to why you said so, that would be great, thank you once again and I hope you enjoyed it. Also, if you liked the story, a like would be greatly appreciated! And of course a rating on a scale of 1-10 and why would be appreciated as well. Thanks for reading, and once again, I hoped you enjoyed it.

 

This is pretty darn impressive.
I give it 9/10 only because there was a little too much repetition of the blood.

As for praise, the theme was overall quite ominous and well done, the Chinese part was also fine (being Chinese as well, I checked if it fit), and the ending was pretty good, though you somehow living should have just been replaced by the message you said and the last sentence.

 

Bravo, Shadow, Bravo.
That was incredibly amazing.
I luv iet.
<4
100000/10

 

Actually, near the end, I barely lived, but I ended up dying.

 

At first I thought this was the birth of the soulkeeper, but then you died, so...

Anyways It was very well written, other than the mixing of form and from occasionally. Otherwise top notch surreal stuff.

 

XD I am thinking of making a story of my birth. Also, many thanks.

 

Great job on this. You have clearly put in effort into this story.

 

Yeah, you see, I enjoy writing things such as these, and as I said earlier:

Not the real birth in real life, just the birth of the soulkeeper.

 

This was really good.
10/10
Now do it again.

 

I plan on making a story called, "The birth of Shadow_Riolu the Soulkeeper."

 

nice.