[Sumo] Oasis

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  1. Kaiiven

    Kaiiven Mod+‏‏‎ Staff Member Mod+

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    Minigame: Sumo
    Description of the map: See screenshots. Tried to make something unique. Barriers on top of fences, to prevent players from escaping.
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  2. Cherbonyl

    Cherbonyl | Former Mοd | Donator

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    Accept pls
     
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  3. Draggon

    Draggon Resigned, Former M.o.d Donator

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    Damn I'm really loving these "nature" sumo maps. #AcceptPls
     
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  4. Rivenze

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    Another amazing map! :D
     
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    Joeyy Super cool and nice guy Donator

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    Not half bad, good luck dude.
     
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  7. ClassyApple

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    This has to be accepted it's a outstanding map. Good luck for the map to be accepted! =)
     
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  8. roses

    roses how do you admit that you're falling apart? Donator

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    Looks great!
    One of the best maps I've seen.
     
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  9. ItsEchoYT

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    Ok, now I am only going to give some advice in order to enhance the map quality. To begin with, I feel that the fencing can be extended a bit farther. I feel that there has been much too much detail on the actual sumo platform, but not much detail on the surrounding bits. The trees blend somewhat ok, but if you added more, it would enchance the map quality even further. I hope this map does get accepted however, and I hope to see Sumo come back to Jerry and Harry!
    (Other notes: The sugar cane looks off. Why is there only one seating area. This should all be noted when submitting the map! I wish you the best of luck!)

    Sorry take back the seating area part. I didn't observe close enough to see you have incorporated four.
     
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  10. Mookey

    Mookey OITC Veteran Donator

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    You know that you can edit your posts instead of double posting.

    Anyways, I love the theme you went for. Outstanding, yet so simple! I can't wait to play on it, good job!
     
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    I merged your posts, please do not double post.
     
  12. Kaiiven

    Kaiiven Mod+‏‏‎ Staff Member Mod+

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    Detail around the edge? I don't know how to add that. I added slabs and stairs and tried to make things look detailed but I can edit it I guess and see what I can come up with. I wanted to allow people to run around the map when waiting, instead of having tons of obstacles in the way.

    I will try and add some more stuff. Thank you.
     
  13. ItsEchoYT

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    You can do wonders with this map! You don't always have to incorporate everything. It was just my thoughts but I have a phenomenal feeling this would get accepted.
     
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    I agree with extending the fence on the far side and making the map area/running area a more round place so that it's a little symmetrical. I also think you should make that little platform in the water on all four sides or maybe just 2 if you think it's a little excessive. Also, you should edit the outer area where people can run around (the platform) and add more detail like different textures and other colours from the palette you are using. And besides the floor, I think you should add more things on that outer area as well because it looks like one side has a beach bed and blabla and then the other side is kinda just empty. I also think you should remove or make less fences extending in that part of the platform that connected the sumo platform area to the outer "beach" area. (the one which I said should be on either all 4 sides or only 2). Also, I think on one side of the map there's a lot more trees in the water than on the other so you should make it less and not add more to the scarce side. Lastly, it can't have only fences when it's put in sumo. I think it has to have walls or something, so I think you should add maybe sand mounds or something of that sort (which can be made vanilla or with world edit).
     
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    I will add sand mounds around the outside and add some fences on the top of them maybe? I will always try and make it more round, I would of if I had world edit but when I try and launch it, it crashes my game rip.
     
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  16. quakingariana

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    Yeah, well they don't need to be too high. Just enough to prevent players from falling into the void. :)
     
  17. Kaiiven

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    Void?
     
  18. quakingariana

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    Like, in sumo maps,
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    as you can see, there's no outside world beyond the walls. In your map, yours is in a whole world. What I meant is that having those mounds will make it so players can't escape the map and go into the world (if there is another one with all the other maps) or the void.
     
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  19. roses

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    Good catch
     
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  20. PopeUrbanII

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    The fact there is only a bridge on one side triggers my OCD, other than that, I like it.