[Skywars] Fantasy Map

Discussion in 'Map Submissions' started by ANumber2Pencil, Feb 26, 2017.

  1. ANumber2Pencil

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    Minigame: Skywars
    Description of the map: Fantasy based map with 12 floating hot air balloons for each player to start out in.
    Screenshots: http://imgur.com/a/4vcg2

    Update #1: Added Huts to outside islands and fixed glowstone lighting on hot air balloons. http://imgur.com/a/FkDxT

    Credits to: (Your IGN or your Build-team's name (only letters or numbers)): ANumber2Pencil, Gamerrizz, _Kreon_, and Prae4Me
     
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  3. kaizer

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    WOW THATS AMAZING DID U BUILD THAT YOUR OWN?! :)

    Oh my bad you and Gamerrizz and KreoN and prae4me did
     
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  4. Darkstorm77

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    I would have to be very nit-picky to find flaws in this map, so here is what I offer for an overall judgement:

    -This map feels like it fits in; it has the same feel as all of the other current maps. Maybe this is a bad thing, but I think it is a good thing personally.

    -The only problem I see with this map is the gameplay when it comes to the floating ships. I am wondering the purpose of them [not themewise] and it seems it would make the map much harder to locate players (considering much easier access to skybasing with more area).

    Other than that, this seems a successful build. Good job, guys!
     
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  6. DeadlyBirdx

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    Yes, this is overall an outstanding build. I do see a problem with the ships. Players can easily build up to them and camp there. There should either be barriers around them or they shouldn't be low.
     
  7. Trisssy

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    I personally love this build, Very detailed and cheerful and colourful. Love the hot air balloons aswell!!
    Although the floating ships is a possible problem, Like DealdyBirdx said players can camp up there so maybe change it so they can't camp.
     
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    I don't like how the starter islands are all connected, it may look nice but that makes for bad gameplay in my opinion. Also, that structure in the middle doesn't really suit the map at all. To explain it better, you have you have hot air balloons for starter islands, islands being held up by nice looking ships, but then the center island is just a random structure floating there that doesn't fit the theme. If you want to keep the bridges, it doesn't matter but I think you should at least change the structure in the center.

    Just a side note, why does the build team build that structure in the middle so much, just with a different block palette?
     
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    I agree with @Matrizzle's points, but to add onto what he said; I think the middle island is too small given the scale of the map, this isn't a huge deal but it's just something I noticed.

    I'd recommend having 3 chests on each spawn island, as the items tend to be somewhat unbalanced when they are only two.
     
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    If this doesn't get accepted I am so done.
     
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    I likey
     
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    Amazing! :)
     
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    Amazing build, I really like the map :)
     
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    I thought this was accepted already.

    Looks amazing. Can't wait to see it and to play it.
     
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  15. ANumber2Pencil

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    Haha thanks for the optimism but I highly doubt this will be added as there are still many flaws, there is always a possibility though and thank you for the support

    Every Spawn island comes with three chest
     
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    Your Welcome :)
     
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    Great map! I'd like to see it added.
     
  18. KreoN

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    We didn't build that... we made it more detailed.
     
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    Nice Building!
     
  20. Luckystar

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    Your build is amazing. Great work! :)