[SB] Prismarines Island

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  1. xSharpnessSeven

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  2. Teddie

    Teddie Former Hełper Donator

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    Good island to start with. Here are a couple suggestions I would recommend to make your island viable for the server:
    • Make it smaller. The other islands are way smaller than this and this one seems just too big.
    • Too plain. This island is just filled with one kind of block compared to the others which has generally a wide variety of blocks to work with.
    • Too much water. There's an unlimited water source in the middle which leads to free water every time. Also, there is a lot of water towards the side.
    I hope you take this consideration into mind and apply it onto your island.
    Best of luck!
     
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    Costellon �Digital Artist� Donator

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    too simple if you'd ask me. if this were sold on the store, i wouldn't buy it.
    good idea, though.
     
  4. sunflower

    sunflower my teeth hurt a lot 'cause i grind 'em with stress Donator

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    Like what Flamity said, I would not buy this from the store. There is nothing visually appealing about it, it's very generic and very plain.

    Sorry, but following these
    Will help you a lot.
     
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    kedio 2017 년 7 월 25 일 | ❤∂εαтнℓεss❤ Donator

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    It looks too plain, and it lacks detail. If a bit more detail was added, then it would be better. Other than that, looks pretty cool.
     
  6. YouFoundGolem

    YouFoundGolem Mentally Dying Inside Donator

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    It's so plain and it looks like you did it in 5 minutes and half fasted it...
     
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    PopeUrbanII deus vult Donator

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    Instead of going at his throat, try to give him ideas on how to improve it.
    Imo it's too square and you should try to add more depth + detail.
     
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    sunflower my teeth hurt a lot 'cause i grind 'em with stress Donator

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    He's not, he's giving his opinion on how it looks how he did it. Not everybody has to follow the "try to give him ideas on how to improve it".
     
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    YouFoundGolem Mentally Dying Inside Donator

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    Sorry, so here are my ideas..

    • Try making it more not so flattish, add more little features to the top or bottom of the island
    • Add more blocks, some of the islands are themed as different things but they use some of the other blocks.
    • Finally and the most important, ass a statue of me! It makes all the islands better. lol
    Hope some of these ideas help you out!
    Late Reply:
    I usually don't give ideas on it but I just say if they are good or not. Thanks for backing me up though!
     
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    1/10 for prismarines.
    I think;
    • You should remove sign about who created. Players don't have to see. (You placed every corner, Designed and Built by xSharrpnessSeven)
    • You should add something about which items in chest.
    • You should say which spawnpoint players start.
    • Already there is a kit about prismarines.
    • Actually you have to do your own ideas. Here is the link.
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    You should not show the maps you quoted like yourself @xSharpnessSeven
     
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