[PK] Flood in the Garden

Discussion in 'Map Submissions' started by ZeusV, Oct 7, 2017.

  1. ZeusV

    ZeusV Moderator Staff Member Moderator

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    IGN: ZeusV
    Minigame: Parkour
    Description of the map: A little parkour featuring a flood that has spread in a garden. Parkour your way to avoid the flood.
    Screenshots: https://imgur.com/a/YsNO8
    Credits to: ZeusV & Desubscribed

    This is my first ever parkour map that I made & submitted, I do not want negative feedback but as always feedback is very supportive, thanks a lot and I will send a download link and add anything or fix anything that's needed.
     
  2. PopeUrbanII

    PopeUrbanII deus vult Donator

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    It's a good start, but I think you should add more detail and make the walls look less bland (like in the last screenshot).
     
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  3. YouFoundGolem

    YouFoundGolem Mentally Dying Inside Donator

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    Like he said, it needs more detail. I think its great, but that's probably from my lack of building skills.
     
  4. RulerofMobs

    RulerofMobs We waste a lot of time crying over wasted time -NF Donator

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    I think it's pretty good, but it seems short and seems to kind of resemble rain bow. Also, add a bit more detail.
     
  5. Costellon

    Costellon �Digital Artist� Donator

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    sorry, but this is a 2012 looking map to me.
     
  6. sunflower

    sunflower my teeth hurt a lot 'cause i grind 'em with stress Donator

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    hello

    I think your thought process behind making this map wasn't in the wrong place, however, you and I both know there are things that could have been better.

    I think it wasn't a bad idea to bring back 2013-2014 era maps (at least new ones). In fact, it's a very creative way to make something popular again. I would suggest you try a different theme however. The flood in the garden is very, very unique, but it kind of reminds me 2D version of Over The Hill.

    A little more time with this map and you'll work to perfection.
     
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  7. Yzel

    Yzel Jess - Yzel Donator

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    It's alright, but I do feel that it could be less cubed and more detailed.
     
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