[Parkour] SewageCanal

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  1. Trevah

    Trevah Dude I am so high. Donator

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    Description of the map: Again, another sewers map. This is only a medium map(according to me). Hope it looks good! I didn't spend much time into it, so don't judge me.
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    Credits to: trevor9200
     
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  2. Amandq

    Amandq cloud-enthusiast / helper Staff Member Helper

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    I enjoy the map, but it seems very plain. The variety in blocks used is well used, but there is little to no dimension with the map. Adding more outcrops or corrosion in the walls would make this map “pop” a little better. Also, make sure to add the tag [Parkour] to the title of your submission. Keep up the good work!
     
  3. Trevah

    Trevah Dude I am so high. Donator

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    I get what you’re saying. Thanks.
     
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  4. Zamorak

    Zamorak Staff Member Moderator

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    Don't get me wrong but I think this is a wonderful map, and I like the simplicity of the parkour jumps. But there are a few things you could improve, and I'm sure you can agree this could use a little more work considering you said didn't put much time into it:
    • Try give the walls, roof and ground some depth, at the moment they're flat
    • Your primary block choice seems to be Stone Brick and its variants, I'd try add in some other colors/blocks
    • Torches never really seem to look too good, so adding in hidden lighting like Glowstone under the water or something as an alternative would look better
    • I may be wrong, but I think you built this map on another server, and if this map submission is accepted you have to send a download link for this parkour, and if you're unable to do that this map can't be implemented
    • Instead of having flat walls fairly close to the jumps, maybe extending them out and creating room for more background decoration would make this map pop out more
    I hope these ideas help you improve your map. Good luck!
     
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  5. Trevah

    Trevah Dude I am so high. Donator

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    Thank you! I will implement these right away!
     
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