[Parkour] Ice Age

IGN: Shadow23221
Minigame: Parkour
Description of the map: A small parkour map set in a Frozen Valley with a deteriorating bridge and other small additions.
Screenshots: http://imgur.com/a/mqMmE
Credits to: Shadow23221

 

I suggest a little less deadspace in the water?

 

Thanks for the suggestion, I have added a ship in the water to add a bit more color in the empty areas
http://imgur.com/a/vgcVC

 

Bro this is a great map! (According to the screenshots)

Could you possibly change the texture pack and use shaders in some screenshots? I think the Chroma Hills texture pack looks really good with shaders. Good luck mate!

 

Yeah to me it seems cool! I would totally play it!
Good luck :)

 

It's nice but the jumps could use some work! :P

 

I can tell you used a form of voxelsniper / worldedit. Try to not make the spheres as recognizable..

 

True, but other than that, It's a great map!

 

• Make the dead tree look less like a palm tree.
• House detailing could be better
• Pillar detail could be better
• Be sure to patch up any areas with barriers that aren't supposed to be accessible.

Other than that, good map; best od luck!

 

Great map, I can't wait for it to be accepted so I can jump all over it. GL!

 

Good start of a map, but as said above, I seriously thought the tree was a palm tree. Also there isn't much going on in the water still. I'd suggest adding depth to the water and still adding something else to bring the map to life more.

Other than that, good luck

 

This will get accepted.