[Parkour] Ice Age v2

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  1. StraightWhiteGuy

    StraightWhiteGuy Moderator Staff Member Moderator

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    IGN: ANumber2Pencil
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    Description of the map: Second updated version of my old parkour map, set in an ice filled valley.
    Screenshots: http://imgur.com/a/m6ZHL
    Credits to: ANumber2Pencil
     
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  2. Yzel

    Yzel Jess - Yzel Donator

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    I like the landscaping but I feel it would look better with more decorations; trees, ice sculptures, etc.
     
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    Draggon Resigned, Former M.o.d Donator

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    They rly need to add in more maps (not like ima play them but whatever)

    I like your map. Should be accepted
     
  4. TwageTomato

    TwageTomato [Mod] | Coder | 4.5yr Vet | Experienced Builder Staff Member Moderator

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    I agree with what @Yzel said. The landscaping is extremely well done, layering and all, but it could definitely use some ice spikes or spruce trees or other decorations. Otherwise, great map :)
     
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    /accept
     
  6. aund

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    Really amazing build! The landscape was really well done and there is a lot of detail to this build. But as the others above me have said. I believe it could use some more detail for the scenery of the map itself.
    and maybe some ice houses ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
     
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  7. Yzel

    Yzel Jess - Yzel Donator

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    Ice kings mansion! :3
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    Also @ANumber2Pencil think of what you could add based on what people have said:
    Trees,
    Huts,
    Ice Sculptures,
    Frozen Waterfalls,
    Caves,
    etc.
     
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  8. Trump

    Trump Your President of the United States Donator

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    I don't think trees would fit this map very well.
     
  9. Yzel

    Yzel Jess - Yzel Donator

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    I think so.
     
  10. Expe

    Expe ⚜ i can thank you for how strong i have become Donator

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    This is a month+ old, but this map is still very good and has a lot of potential. Here are some things you could do to make this map better:
    • The jumps. From the images, most of the jumps are just slabs on top of fence, which although isn't terrible, but it could be better, especially with the landscape around it.
    • There is nothing that stands out. The landscape is beautiful, my only problem with it is that there is no trees, hell they could be dead trees and this place would look more alive. Right now, the area seems very bare.
    • Try adding ores into the rocks, or random rock formations with ores. This ties in with it being more lively, right now it's dull and the ores could make it stand out more.
    Try these suggestions, I would love to see how it turns out, however so far so good!