[Parkour] God's Dimension

Discussion in 'Map Submissions' started by Cerdax, Jan 23, 2019.

  1. Cerdax

    Cerdax Bad. Very bad. Just bad.

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    Minigame: Parkour
    Description of the map: Quartz/birch theme with structures as the main focus, surrounding mountains to keep players inside the map.
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    Credits to: Cerdax
     
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  2. ItsEchoYT

    ItsEchoYT Staff Member Helper

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    Pretty good map!

    The flaws I find is the lack of grass, flowers, etc. I think once you give it that natural look, then this map would look amazing. Secondly, I think the architecture is phenomenal however the interior of the palace looks a bit dull. Maybe try adding some colour?

    Other than that, I think the map is well designed, but I think you can take it to the next level with the above feedback. Hope this gets submitted!

    If you have any queries and doubts, feel free to message me!
     
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  3. hmj

    hmj Staff Member Helper

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    Love this!
     
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  4. Trevah

    Trevah Dude I am so high. Donator

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    Looks amazing!
     
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  5. Mxrk

    Mxrk The Nice Guy Donator

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    Awesome. Just pure Awesome.
     
  6. Zamorak

    Zamorak Staff Member Moderator

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    This Parkour map is magnificent. This map also has a unique nature and Quartz theme to it, which looks fabulous. There are a few things I'd like to mention though:
    • The inside of the building seems a bit dark, some more lighting or natural sunlight would make it look a whole lot better (You can even put Sea lanterns under the water)
    • Instead of having plain grass, you could add some Coarse Dirt or gravel to make it look more appealing
    • More screenshots of this map or even a recording of a run-through would be useful, right now we can only really seem to see one or two segments of the Parkour. Not a lot to judge about it

    I hope you consider some of these changes and that this map is accepted. It looks amazing! Good luck!

    I totally didn't think this was a Parkour spawn and then edit my post after Cheezi told me it was a map..
     
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  7. Cheez

    Cheez Admin Senpai Staff Member Administrator

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    Im pretty sure this is a parkour map and not a spawn