[Parkour] Geometry

With all due respect, I'm just not seeing what's appeasing about the map. It looks really boring and lacking. I'm not sure in what, but I couldn't even notice the change that you made.

 

I reversed the black and white wall colors

 

Ahh, I see it now. I'm still feeling like the map is lacking some sort of pizzazz that all the other parkour maps on the server has. Maybe adding more detail? I still do think that adding more different block types will help. Obviously don't go overboard, but keeping it to a minimum is what I'm suggesting. I'm not sure what else I can offer, but good luck with your map!

 

Thank you :)

 

Yeah, it looks really messy, but that’s ttthe whole point of it. I say it’s perfect for what it was designed to be, I would like to see it in parkour.

 

I'm going to give my full and honest opinion to the benefit of this map.

The concept is amazing, I love the theme and what you've done with the designs. However, when I look at this, it's kind of like something I would come across on a Creative plot that was abandoned. In a way, it's kind of "lazily" built if you will (don't get me wrong, I make lazy maps too) but I wouldn't expect it to be the perfect fit for the server in any way.

It just doesn't really flow and feels very out of place. Not just that, but I am not even sure where the jumps are, all I see is a few structures in the sky and that's it. The flooring, otherwise, is pretty cool. I'll give you props for that, but everything else... it's just boring.

I hope you improve your map and that it evolves into something greater!

 

Thank you for your response. If you'd like, I can post a short vid of map completion/map run through.

Do you think you could give me better tips on how to better my map/make it more server appropriate? Thanks again (:

 

Perhaps make it in an open world instead of 4 walls and in a void world, and a video sounds cool!

 

really good theme muff_mob but from the pictures it doesnt give me the itsjerryandharry parkour feeling personally

 

Omg I'm so sorry I forgot about this.