I would suggest adding actual screenshots so people can see the map rather than download some sketchy looking zip file. Also, OITC added plenty of new maps not too long ago and I personally don't see a need for anymore.
Here are the screenshots for those who don't want to bother downloading it. No daytime because sun doesn't show up and the lighting is horrible (not the map, just my computer). My thoughts: Definitely make it bigger and add more details. Looks kind of boring with just a pile of sand and some boxes everywhere. Make an easier way to escape the weird drill pit area. Don't put too many doors because it's awkward having to open doors to fight someone.
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Thanks for giving me some tips and i will get rid of doors and i will try to make it bigger and i will add more thing to it Thanks -GangstaPanda / Andrew