Impossible Maze [Parkour]

Discussion in 'Map Submissions' started by Kaizerroooll, Mar 28, 2017.

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Should this Parkour Get Accepted?

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  2. No

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  1. Kaizerroooll

    Kaizerroooll Legend Former Sonorant In Echo Donator

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  2. Witha

    Witha Mandy 11.28.21 <3 Donator

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    I am sorry but from what I'm seeing from these pictures this doesnt look like parkour
     
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  3. Rivenze

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    I agree. ^
     
  4. Kaizerroooll

    Kaizerroooll Legend Former Sonorant In Echo Donator

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  5. Joeyy

    Joeyy Silly Goose of the year 2022 Donator

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    Dude, I know you tried on this, but it's just not good enough to make it into the parkour maps.
     
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  6. Kaizerroooll

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  7. Darkstorm77

    Darkstorm77 Former M.od+ Donator

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    There are a few things about this map that lower the chances of it being accepted:

    1) It highly resembles map Jewel Run

    2) It is very short/very easy

    3) It has no scenery. Only diamond blocks are used (mainly) and it has no big theme

    For this to have a higher chance of being accepted, you need to:

    1) Change the name. This map might be confused with map Impossible

    2) Expand the size (start over)

    3) Make the difficulty more reasonable

    4) Add in a much bigger variety of block choice

    5) Make a detailed scenery


    Here is a quote from the "How to submit a map" tutorial:
    This map has very little detail, a plain appearance, and it doesn't look very good. You could expand on the concept itself, but you just need to start over.
     
  8. rosellavio

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    I'd reccomend more parkour, and more detail. If you want your map to get accepted, there are many things you need to include.

    • (Optional) Record you or a friend playing the map, which clarifies if it's possible or not. Doing this may increase your chance of being accepted, as you go through the whole map.
    • Add some detail around the walls and the floor. Doing so can make the map seem more fun/appealing. That's excactly what you want to aim for!
    • Use more blocks. The map seems plain and it could improve by using more blocks.
    • Make the path more clear. Tight edges aren't very fun, since I've asked a lot of people what kind of parkour they like and they like ones with free space. That doesn't mean you have to start over, it means I'd just reccomend that you'd free it up a bit.
    • Improve the grammar on the signs.
    • As @Darkstorm77 has listed, you should make a more detailed scenery. I couldn't say it any better
    • Put some finishing touches, the map looks way too basic. I already said it looked plain and needed detail, but adding a finishing touch/last effect wouldn't hurt.
     
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    I'm... just not going to say anything.
    Everyone already had what I was gonna say.
     
  10. Strikyn

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    Sorry, I just don't think it's good enough. Also, there is very limited parkour. I would recommend adding more parkour
     
  11. Kaizerroooll

    Kaizerroooll Legend Former Sonorant In Echo Donator

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    Its Okay.
     
  12. sss

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    It's very plain and narrow, and looks really short. This doesn't really look like a parkour map.

    As stated above, it's just too bland and simple, and honestly looks rushed. You shouldn't limit the entire map to only two things (in this case, diamond blocks and lava) and you should definitely consider using WorldEdit or VoxelSniper, as most builders do.

    This is way too much like Jewel Run. The concept of a maze themed parkour sounds nice, but it definitely needs some work. Scenery, detail, different blocks (and possibly lose the cobwebs), etc. Make the map longer, and try not to limit it to short one-block jumps. Give yourself a challenge and be creative. I'd highly suggest taking a look at some examples of other maps to give yourself some ideas of your own. Good luck regardless.
     
  13. Kaizerroooll

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    Thanks, :)
     
  14. Luckystar

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    I'm sorry if I'm rude, but this map has no detail once so ever. I'm very sorry if I'm rude, but this is my opinion.
     
  15. Kaizerroooll

    Kaizerroooll Legend Former Sonorant In Echo Donator

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    I don't know how to close this so can a staff member close this map sumbission please. besides I made a new parkour Sumbission so thanks <3
     
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    Closed upon request.
    /c.
     
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