Hope at worlds end (IJAH Fanfiction)

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  1. John_0696

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    This is another fanfiction i am writing, its gonna have IJAH forum members, but will not take place in a server, but in a world called Minecraftia, Its gonna be like the Transformers IJAH fanfiction i made, but this one is entirely different. I do not own transformers either it belongs to hasbro, Just a disclaimer for that. If you have watched the 1986 transformers movie, you may know who is going to be in this story. anyways Here is the first part :D ENJOY!

    Prologue: Screen opens up to a space scene with lots of stars, it pans towards 2 faint glowing orbs floating through the vacuum of space. camera zooms in to 2 robot spheres

    Space core: So much space, Need to see it all! Im in space! omg im in space!

    Wheatley: How many times do i have to tell you!? i know your in space!! Ugh.

    Space core: *Looks over to ff the screen and opens eye very wide* Hey. hey. hey look. look. over there. Planet. Huge planet.

    Wheatley: Really? Congratulations, you became even MORE defective..

    Space core: No, seriously. Look, Huge planet. Over there

    Wheatley: Okay, ill believe you just this time, other than that, i wont believe a single thing you say.

    Wheatley turns towards where space core is looking, then hie expression turned from Annoyance to fear, and starts shivering

    Wheatley: bloody hell...

    the 2 cores stare at a Enormous ball shrouded in darkness heading towards them, but then pans over to the side where it misses them, It had a giant gaping hole in the front, with 2 Giant pincher-like Horns on the front, it had a ring like Uranus, and was moving insanely fast, the ball was about half the size of Neptune, Wheatley and Space core gazed at it with awe as it zoomed by them.

    Wheatley: that thing is massive...

    the planet sized ball was heading towards a small moon, it didnt look like it had life on it, but then what happened next was Terrifying, The giant pinchers on the side of the planet Grabbed the moon, and Moved it towards the giant hole on the side of the planet, then the hole opened up like a flower blossoming, and took a bite of the moon, then another, and another until the moon was gone. then the ball started glowing possibly because eating moons gives it energy. then started moving away into deep space.

    Wheatley: whatever that thing was... it does NOT look nice.


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    It is the Arrival... of Unicron (Yes thats the villians name dont know who he is, search it up :P)
     
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  2. Shadow_Folf

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    Love it.
     
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    I like this.
     
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  4. Huesan

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    Wow! That's awesome!
     
  5. John_0696

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    After the prologue, its time to start the actual story! :D inspried by @BossClaires story, i am going to use some characters in this story (if shes okay with it) Starring @The_Demonstar01 @_HUBBLE_ and @bunniesunday @WikiRigbyDude @Saul1337 and @MrDeathWilliamand of course @ItsHarry!


    Chapter 1

    The sun rose on a warm summer morning, Birds chirped and peaceful animals wondered around as usual, Nearby, was a Mansion being constructed by a group of teenagers consisting of a person wearing loki gear a person who is in the "Brodyist" religion, a Teenager wearing a red and black bandana was sitting a Giant golden throne and another teenager wearing a grey shirt and dark blue pants was standing around drinking a soda.

    "faster! i want my choco-loco mansion done by sundown!" Hubble said in a arrogant manor, Demon sighed "Yes master" then rolled his eyes as he turned away. "i saw that.." said hubble staring at demon with an annoyed look in his face. Nearby John laughed with delight and looked over to one of his friends Named Starlight and said "some king he is, he would put that other king to shame!" "Shaddup john, ill put you to shame, as you know i am the greatest king ever!" To prove to john, hubble reached over to grab his Demon Blood sword and held it up And shook it ' i own a talking blood sword, YOU dont! you ll never see a king have on of these!" hubbles hand slipped and the sword dropped onto the top of his head, hit him and then dropped to the ground. "Ouch what the hell!?!?" John then busted up laughing again ' thats not even your sword hubble! thats demons!" Demon turned around and saw hubble holding his head from the pain and saw his sword on the ground "Hubble!! What are you doing with my sword!?" Demon ran and picked up his sword then looked at hubble and slapped him. "never.. NEVER touch my sword again!"
    "that there proves my point!" John said then turned towards starlight and high fived her.

    "Guys! come look at this! this is crazy!" Bunnie hollered to The others, On the daily fart, The headlines showed the following: Harry suffering from Unknown sickness, Medical specialists working tirelessly for explanation

    Johns eyes widened as he read the headlines, then looked over at Claire with shock, claire just stood there. Thinking of the Corruption that happened 2 years ago, and worried that traces of the corruption was left in Harrys brain. "Oh no.. its gonna happen again.." Claire murmured to herself with a stressed look on her face, she then walked over to a nearby chair and sat down.and put her Palm to her forehead. Bunnie looked at claire and said "whats wrong claire? story getting to you?" bunnie sat down next to claire and put her harm on her shoulder to comfort her. "nothing bunnie, its just that this news story reminds me so much of the corruption, I cant seem to get it off my mind now." "Oh no, Harry thinks hes Reetu again!?" john said frantically, "i didnt say that john, i said that im afraid hes still recovering from the corrruption, not saying hes completely corrupted again!" John then breathed a sigh of relief. "Whew i thought i was gonig to become a victim of those Trash compactor guns again, you know the ones that shoot those yellow balls-" "yes we know John, none of us want to fall victim to those again" Demon said as he Read the newspaper. Claire then looked up to the others And got up. "This means that we have to round up the others and help harry,we dont want the whole country dead again. Pack your stuff and grab your weapons, we got a life to save. The teens then went to the mansion to get ready...

    Meanwhile Harry was Laying in bed, He wasnt sick like Flu or Cold, He had a sickness with his cerebral functions, something was trying to get into his mind and Do something to harry. No one knows what it is except for him. Jerry walked in with a glass of water and some food for Harry. "here bro, you need this." Jerry said putting the food in a little table on his bed. "William prepared it for you, if you find something that doesnt belong in there, let me know. Hes in a prankster mood today." Harry looked at his brother with a Tired look on his face. "Thanks bro, i really appreciate you making this food" as he was about to take a bite of his french toast, He let go of it and started Clutching his head screaming in pain "Harry!! Whats gotten into you!?" Jerry ran up to aide harry, who was tossing and turning while holding his head screaming Harry yelled in Agony "AAAAAAGHH.. HELP ME!! HES TRYING TO KILL MEE!!" William and saul ran in to see what was going on, "jerry! whats going on!? Saul said in fright as he ran up to harrys bed. "Harrys having on of his Mental breakdowns again! Hold him down while I calm him!"
    Saul grabbed his legs and kept them still while jerry took a potion of Healing and stuffed it in his mouth, Harry drank the potion then started to calm down. he sat up Looking at the others sweating and dazed. "you guys... have no idea whats going on with me, hes hes coming!" Jerry looked at his brother and pushed him back down into the bed, "dont worry, whoever is doing this, we will find out, but for now just rest." the others walked out of the room And shut the door behind them. Harry turned over and whispered to himself "wha-wha, what do you want from me!? Leave me alone! he then heard a booming deep voice from nowhere and froze in fear From what it said to him.


    I SHALL NEVER LEAVE YOU ALONE UNTIL YOU DO WHAT I COMMAND...



    To be continued! man i think this story is going good! Tell me what youthink in the comments :D
     
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  6. Erove

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    I didn't read it...

    But it looks sexy.
     
  7. magicxx130

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    Three words:
    Oh,My.God.
    Thats THE best story I read in my LIFE.
    Make another one plz.
     
  8. BlueChuckian

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  9. John_0696

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    :( why not i worked hard on that
     
  10. teitan

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    I need to read more of this, it's so good
     
  11. _HUBBLE_

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    Such amaze
    Much Story
    luv
     
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  12. Shadow_Folf

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    Again, love it.
     
  13. Miner

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    can you add me?
    thx
    Story's pretty awesome, it's gonna turn into a great series :D
     
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    i don't play this game anymore yet i'm still here why do you ask, i don't know either
    I am in this? Wow. I never expected me to be in this. Btw, I don't use the Demon Blood Sword anymore, I use Elucidator and the Master Sword using the Dual Wield technique. I've also changed my skin to Kirito from Sword Art Online, so refer to it as a guy wearing all black.
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  16. Enderbrine

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    And the awesome story continues .. Just awesome :D
     
  17. BlueChuckian

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    I was just kidding, I did read your story and it was awesome :)
     
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  18. John_0696

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    Chapter 2! :D

    Nothing much to explain, but i do have to say that @Heatdude Da Waffle and @EpicTNTArrow are Helping me write this story! :) But for now ill write this part.

    The teens were in Johns Car driving to the staff district, Which was a few miles away But to get there they would have to go through the Peaceful district, which was rumored that it was becoming uncivilized, so they Proceeded with caution. "man peaceful is giving me the creeps, The place doesnt even look nice anymore." John said looking out of his window. "i hope this rumor wasnt true, maybe they just havent cleaned up the place yet, theirs been a lot of pollution recently" As they drove, they came by some Small towns, They looked alright at first, until Demon spotted a car on fire And broken Bottles everywhere. "um guys, i dont think this is peaceful anymore.." Demon said nervously. the teens got out of the car to inspect the damage, "You guys going out there are you freakin nuts!?" John said, "Were Just seeing whats going on, whats wrong with that?" Hubble said holding his choco loco sword in his hand.

    Demon knew something was wrong, he paced around the burning car weilding his euclidator in his hand, ready to slash at anyone who would try to harm his friends. Bunnie then Pointed and said in a firghtened tone "g-guys, over there..." The teens looked over down the road of the small town and Saw a Massive mob of people weilding swords and bows, a couple of them were wielding M4A1s, they started throwing molotovs and were shooting bows at riot police trying to hold them back. the teens stared in horror as People beat innocent players with bats and Pickaxes, Demon was ready to fight. he held his sword in his hand and stood his ground. Hubble Just went "Nope" and Ran back to the car and locked the doors.

    "Demon, i dont think you can take these guys, they look pissed." Claire said,"Nonsense claire, you obviously havent seen me fight. ive dealt with threats greater than a mob of angry people" He then ran towards the mob to help the riot police, he managed to hold the People back until one of them tried to grab his sword and yank it from him, he resisted and kept fighting against the angry crowd. after 15 minutes of the teens trying to hold them back. the crowd managed to calm down, but were still angry. "What is causing you to Become angry?" claire announced to the crowd. "Jerry and harry arent doing their duties to keep the Server in Balance! so were trying to do it ourselves!" one of the people hollered. "Jerry and Harry are nothing but lazy assholes. they have done Zero for the peaceful district! so we have no choice But to make peaceful good for all of us!" Claire knew that the crowd of rioters werent that bright, so she tried to explain why they havent been doing anything recently "Harry is suffering from some type of sickness, they are working as hard as they can to keep the server under control while harry recovers!" Claire said, "BULLSHIT! harry isnt sick! hes just sitting on his lazy ass not doing anything for the server!" Another person said, "The crowd then started getting violent again, "Stand back you players! cant you even see the suffering and pain Harry is in right now? hes not in the state to work on the server!" Demon said as he was shoving his sword into the crowd to keep him back. just then a Big man came up to demon and grabbed him by the shirt and pulled him into the crowd. the people started beating demon by kicking him, Slamming pickaxes into his arms and Beating him Repeatedly with Batons. Claire then lifted his staff and yelled "LISTEN TO ME!!!! OR ELSE YOU SHALL PAY!" the crowd Started to retreat from the gods threat. there lay demon with Blood and Bruises all over him On the ground. bunnie then ran to help him up. "ugh... he-heal m-me..." Demon said in pain, "Sure thing demon, CALL 911!!!" bunnie then shouted to John...


    "What are we going to do about harry? Hes in the worst condition i ever seen." misfit said while drinking her morning coffee. "I dont really know misfit, we moved him to the hospital so the nurses can help him recover. he may not be out for a couple months." saul said as he was getting his breakfast. "Wow, the server is really falling apart Without harry. he was the only one who worked on the coding and stuff. Look on the tv." commander DWG said. the staff gathered around the tv to see the peaceful district riots, "oh my god... peaceful! why peaceful!? thats the last place i would see a riot happening!" Mira said in shock. They watched people blow up innocent bystanders houses and take their belongings, they also saw riot police throwing tear gas and holding people back with riot shields. "Oh my god, thats it. i need to round up my strike force, were going in." Commander dwg said while getting up. "Im going too!" Devin said putting his coffee cup down. "Assemble the national guard, we got a riot to take care of." DWG radioed to gthang through his walkie talkie...

    In the hospital, Harry lay awake in his hospital bed dazed and confused from the unknown force that tried to attack him. The door opened to his room, and William walked in. "Hey harry, jerry wanted me to check up on you. hes been real busy handling the server lately. you alright?" harry slowly turned his head towards him and murmured" oh.. um hey william, yeah, im starting to feel alright. just that im still confused from earlier.." harry said. "Okay harry, the nurses said that they will be checking up on you in just a little bit." Harry then started staring in awe at william, no response. "ummm harry? you alright?" william said waving his hand in front of his face, still no response. in harrys vision, what he saw was terrifying, everything around him turned to a darkish tone, and he then heard a sharp loud sound out of nowhere, he then started stammering from what he saw. "Wi-i-william, He-hes co-coming!!!" William started panicking, "Oh no.. Stay calm harry! ill go get the nurses ASAP!" seconds later william and 2 nurses ran in to aide harry once again. "UNICRON! UNICRON! HES COMIIIIIIIIING!!!!" harry screamed really loud, William then paused and said in his head, "What i the name of Notch is Unicron??"
    he then let go of harry and started pacing around the room while the nurses help harry. "Who is this thing harry is talknig about?" william thought to himself "Whatever it is, i should let the staff know, this guy could be a threat"...

    To be continued in chapter 3!! :D
     
  19. Enderbrine

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    CONTINUE! if you can.
    *Likes Chapter 2*
     
  20. John_0696

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    oops i meant chapter 2 :P