Hidden Powers: Chapter 1

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  1. Erove

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    New series, bish.



    Chapter 1 - Hidden Powers [ A Found Secret ]

    Erove opened up the cabinet in the attic. She coughed uncontrollably. "Weew. Smoke party." she said, coughing more.
    Star jumped off the bed.
    "Is it safe up here?" Star asked.
    "As long as Riolu isn't lying, we're fine." Erove said.
    Riolu came running into the attic, panting profusely.
    "Um..."
    He jumped onto the bed and panted more.
    She saw a book in the cabinet and she was in a shock.
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    "Whoa..." she muttered to herself.
    "GUYS, LOOK!"
    Riolu slid himself off the bed and Star walked over there.
    "That's it!" Riolu yelled. "That's the book!"
    "Is there a second one?" asked Star. "It wouldn't say '1' there for no reason..."
    "This may give us super powers!" Erove yelled.
    "And that would come in handy for..." Star muttered.
    "Dark Empire," Riolu said."They come every century and in two weeks they're coming to get us. Our planet will turn to dust just for them if we don't fix it."
    "Yikes..."
    Erove flipped through the pages of the book and saw a page with 4 fingers.
    "Is this necessary? I always feel like I'm reading a children's book." Erove said, snickering.
    Riolu paused. "No..."
    "THEN WHAT IS IT?!!?!" Erove yelled.
    "It's a combination. We need to find the second book... combine it, make it the third book, and that shows us the combination to the powers!" Riolu said.
    "And were will be put this 'combination' for the powers?" Star asked.
    Riolu sat there in silence. "It's in the book." he said.
    Erove flipped through more pages and saw a map. "Is this it?" Erove asked showing the book to Riolu.
    "Yup." Riolu said pointing at certain parts and blabbering about them.
    "Here," he said. "We need to get to Webbed Pines and get through that mansion through the 174 doors of memories, nightmares, and some things we may not want to come to."
    "WHERE'S WEBBED PINES?!?" Star yelled.
    "It's North." Riolu said.
    "Then let's get going!" Erove said, packing up her backpack.


    Chapter 2 tomorrow. ♥
     
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    I like I am included, but just asking, may I ask who the dark empire is, or of (s)he has even been introduced yet? (I don't know my position either. What is my position?)
     
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    Nice story, much thumbs up! Matching character personalities, well written, good grammar.
     
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    Your one of the heroes.
    The Dark Empire is a group that will come every century to try to make Earth a terror so they can rule it. But with the help of me, you, and Star, we might save it.
     
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    Does every have their roles. I'm still imagining Riolu as a soul keeper, star as blu scout, and you as a Angel-sword girl.
     
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    Shhhh you might ruin it.
     
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    Ok no more spoilers
     
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    Heroes? {Insert sad face here.} You would know I'd prefer evil over good. But it is your story, I like that you included me either way.