[HC] Spawn

Discussion in 'Map Submissions' started by Heatdude Da Waffle, Jan 31, 2016.

  1. Heatdude Da Waffle

    Heatdude Da Waffle Ex Really really not HeIper Donator

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    Description of the map: My spawn consists of a main hourglass-shaped island with the join signs and info board on it as well as additional floating islands surrounding it. The floating islands serve no purpose other than looks, the main island has everything necessary for the lobby.
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  2. TheAverageJo

    TheAverageJo a dead meme Donator

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    looks delicious
     
  3. n00b

    n00b Resigned | Dispenser down | sad Donator

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    Amazing. I love it
     
  4. 7heSw4gCr4ft666

    7heSw4gCr4ft666 wth am I

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    wew, looks a LOT better than the one I made xD Hope to see this.
     
  5. Zackery

    Zackery Resigned - 4 Year Server Vet Donator

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    Get Accepted, Get Accepted, Get Accepted, Get Accepted!
    Looks amazing Heat.. absolutely amazing!!!
     
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  6. Phreiden

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    Damn, this took you quite some time, and it looks better than I expected from the last time I saw it.
     
  7. YuyeeseXPrompX

    YuyeeseXPrompX Prompto Is adorable <3 Donator

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    Omg that looks amazing. Seriously, why would they not accept this? This has to be accepted!
    Looks just like my home. C:
     
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  8. _Frizzy

    _Frizzy good meme | i know the alphabet

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    Okay time to ruin the "looks great" comments I will try and give you my opinion to this build and hopefully no one will get angry for me being a negative person. Let's begin.

    First off let's start with terraforming. The ground is flat IMO and the random hill type things make it look like you had a base and then added onto the flat ground. And some of the islands look a bit odd shaped because of the way you made them. The palette makes the ground look very vanilla as you could have added in some red stained clay or wool to get a little more variety into it.
    The boards feel to flat. You really should make sure there is depth in them just to make them look nicer. And also the wood looks a bit off putting because it's the nether and it probably could've replaced it with stone bricks or something that seems logical in the area it's set in.

    That has been my review of your build hopefully you get something out of it as saying "Nice!" or "Needs to be added" will not help you progress in building.
     
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  9. Dugge

    Dugge \\ [Herobrine] // Donator

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    Great work Heat. Hope it gets accepted.
     
  10. __TheTwitchy12__

    __TheTwitchy12__ ˗ˏˋ trace ˎˊ˗

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    Get accepted.

    You should become a builder c:
     
  11. ConnorFTW

    ConnorFTW [HeroBrine]|Oitc Legend Donator

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    Amazing this needs to be added!
     
  12. Noy

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    For Speed.

    But seriously this is great please don't stop building.
     
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  13. Smg

    Smg TheRealModerator | ❤12-27-16❤ Staff Member Moderator

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    Amazing build

    Truly Amazing :)
     
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  14. Blok

    Blok Everybody hatin we just call em fans tho Donator

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    Awesome!!!!!!
     
  15. Blossom

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    This is amazing!
    I love the fire/lava things.

    I agree with some of what @_Frizzy said tho.
    It's really nice.
     
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  16. ItsPacers

    ItsPacers Well-Known-Member|TØP|♡Pacers♡

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    Stop
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    It's awesome!
     
  17. Ayg

    Ayg Life's taken a bad route for me :/

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    Wow I remember when you were still building this on your server still trying to figure out what the best C would be haha! This is amazing dude!
     
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    WHAT THE FUCK HOW MAN GOOD SHIT IF I DO SAY SO MYSELF GUD SHIT RIGHT HERE I CAN ALMOST TASTE IT
    THE FITNESS GRAM PACER TEST
     
  19. alicee

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    If there was a Building Olympics he would win by far
     
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  20. TheFireroll

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    Looks great.
     
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