[HC] Spawn

Discussion in 'Map Submissions' started by 7heSw4gCr4ft666, Jan 31, 2016.

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Is dis oki?

  1. I like it :D

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  2. It's okay, just some more improvements.

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  3. Nah. Sucks.

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  1. 7heSw4gCr4ft666

    7heSw4gCr4ft666 boiling despayeeto

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    Minigame:
    Herobrine's Chamber.

    Description of the map:
    eh, this is the HC lobby. ;3

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    The whole lobby.

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    The fire chandelier.

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    The walls (bits you may not have seen in the other screenshots).

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    Staircase to other stuff.
    Credits to:

    Me. Credits to me. :P
     
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  2. Xirevert

    Xirevert ( TheFireroll ) Donator

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    More detail would be nice :)
     
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  3. 7heSw4gCr4ft666

    7heSw4gCr4ft666 boiling despayeeto

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    Oki, thanks for the feedback c;
     
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  4. KreoN

    KreoN Manager of Something| 9 Year Vet Donator

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    The blocks are way to repetitive. You need to spice it up a bit more, not build by rows. For example, you have one row only for nether rack and another only for glowstone. Try mixing it up a bit! Best of luck to you! :D
     
  5. BRO3256

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    Take some tips from Grian and you could make some great improvements!
     
  6. 7heSw4gCr4ft666

    7heSw4gCr4ft666 boiling despayeeto

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    I don't like Grian. :P
     
  7. jdjfjcnfnck

    jdjfjcnfnck - Donator

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    Like others said above, add more detail. I also think you could make it a little bigger. It's not bad, but it could be better :)
     
  8. Mocosloco

    Mocosloco forehead is brown egg

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    bro look at the walls in the hub you're building
    yes it has detail
    but way too repetitive
    and you're saying "umgf 2 repetitive 4 the pro builder likes of MEEE"
     
  9. BRO3256

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    no, i just think grian makes well tutorials
     
  10. Raniera

    Raniera [Donator]

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    It's alright, but it's too simple and bland. A bit more detail would make this better.