[FK] HUB

Discussion in 'Map Submissions' started by Leendert, Mar 23, 2018.

  1. Leendert

    Leendert

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    IGN: CrazyGriefer
    Minigame: Farm King
    Description of the map: It's a small-medium hub. As most lobbies and hubs are huge, I thought of Farm King. But of course you can use it for whatever you want
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    Credits to: CrazyGriefer
     
  2. Mareliii

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    I like the concept, and the build looks great, but imo you could add some more details around the build, and maybe do something more with the path in the middle. But as I just said, it still looks very nice.
     
  3. LizzieTheSober

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    lookin good, but i agree with ^^^, it could be a bit more detailed along the path and maybe add some more foliage (plants). good luck with your submission!
     
  4. stempunk

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    I like the start of the build, but I believe buildings look better with a matter of detailing and a better usage of blocks. The average fences could use work, even slabs and stairs could make it look a lot better. And I also think the four roads could use some more details or structuring, it looks to straight in my eyes.
     
  5. Leendert

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    Thank you all guys!
    Do you mean with 'changing the roads' like dirt and other textures between it? Or like not a straight path but like zigzag?
    There will be an update soon!
     
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  6. Mareliii

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    You should make the path look more «natural». I would use a combination between dirt, gravel and different stone blocks, and make the path more random in the edges (It is really square right now, which don’t look to good). Aswell as making it a bit smaller and add some randomly placed fences at the sides

    I would actually recommend you to watch some Youtube videoes about how to make good looking paths and terrain. My builds have improved a lot by this
     
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  7. stempunk

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    I mean like making them less “straight”, and maybe mixing up the roads and make them curve off.
     
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  8. Leendert

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    Thanks for the feedback! I added some dirt textures now, so the only thing I have to do now is make it less straight?

    I used dirt, gravel, stone, cobblestone, andesite