Book: Mystery of my death / 2

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  1. Odi

    Odi

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    Chapters
    Chapter 1 -> Click me!

    A slight notice
    I would like to apologise for the shortage of my previous chapter, what can be found here. The chapter was way shorter then I'd of liked it. Usually, each new chapter would be a brand new month; but due to the shortage of my last book we will continue from October.

    Starring...
    @OdiFTW as Michael
    @Turtwigzz as himself
    We're currently in need of characters; if you'd like a role.. feel free to ask in the comment section below!

    Previously...
    I walked to the bus, as the rain hit the floor. Something weird happened, I saw... My uncle? I shut my eyes, wasn't there. just a trick, stop playing with me, head. Somebody has just grabbed my shoulder. Who is it? I freeze.


    3rd October, 2004
    I feel, tired all most as if I've been running all day. I can't remember anything, what happened. I'm in a rectangular room, completely black. With one door; I'm tied up to a chair with a firm rope. I look over in my pocket, my phone is gone. I feel beaten, or walked with some sort of cane.

    I can swear, that is is horrific in this room. I can hear footsteps, coming. The door opens, and a strange man walks inside.
    It can't be, it's impossible. Uh, uh it's my greattt great uncle. My serial killer; uncle. Who was murdered 12 years ago.
    “How.. How are you alive?” I said, horrified to say another word.
    “The key.” he replied.
    What, what key? I told myself in my head,
    My uncle was a serial killer, nobody spoke of him. He was an evil man, with a slight grin.
    “THE STUPID KEY; WHAT UNLOCKED YOUR STUPID LIFE.
    GIVE IT TO ME; OR I KILL YOU NOW.” he screamed.
    “I don't have any key! Please let me live.” I was scared to hell, I had goosebumps.
    He smiled, and laughed.
    I saw another man walk in, Mr. Wig get over here!
    “Yes sir, what is it?” he replied.
    He gave him a look, “You know what, do it; you stupid fool.” My uncle said. I assumed, it was.. dd deaa death.
    I blacked out. I'm not sure what happened; butt. buttt..

    4th October, 2004
    It was a wet day, the worst day of my families life.
    “It's okay, Vanessa.” said my mum, as a tear rolled down her face. “We'll always remember, Mmm Michael.”

    12th October, 2004
    ** FUNERAL DAY **​
    “Your brother is an absolute idiot. First, my sister! Now my bloody son!” said my mum screaming to my dad. “I know, he's an idiot. Why was he released?” replied my dad.

    13th October, 2004
    Everyday; for my mum it was a nightmare.
    She cried, and thought life is stupid.

    14th October, 2004
    The Daily News
    The case of Michael Gordan's murder continues, with serial killer is still out there.
    A funeral was held in remembrance, and family members/siblings are currently in shock.
    Michael Gordan's phone has been recovered; of his last found location.
    The reward of catching the killer, Mr. Jonathan Gordan will be a reward of $750,000.00 and the price is expected to go up. If you have information, please contact the police immediately.

    15th October, 2004
    My News
    Family is desperate to find answers about what happened to Michael Gordan, the reward of finding the killer; going by the name of "Jonathan Gordan" has rose to $1,000,000.00. Funeral was held, on 12th October and many family members/news reporters were able to attend.

    16th October, 2004
    Global News:
    The hunt will continue to find, Jonathan Gordan after his murder of Michael Gordan, aged around 13-14. Police said, "If anybody, has any information about where Jonathan Gordan is; we need it now. Please. Any information is currently valid and needed to solve this mystery."

    17th October, 2004
    ** BREAKING NEWS **
    Jonathan Gordan location found; but he is still on the run.

    Mr. Jonathan Gorda killed Michael Gordan (aged 14) on 4th October, 2004. The location was founded, after a local recorded a video of Jonathan Gordan with a gun; running across the streets. He is currently located in Melbourne, and is currently on the run. Any information what is given, will be used to solve this mystery. Michael Gordan (aged 14) had his funeral, on 12th October 2004. If Jonathan Gordan is court, a total of $10,000,000.00 will be disrupted to the finders. The price has kept on rising, due to the significant 12 murders Jonathan has made. This, obviously is not his first. He is currently between Melbourne, and is hiding throughout places.

    18th October, 2004
    My family aren't doing well, I am a shadow over them. I am unable to move, and nor talk. I wish I could communicate; and discuss the location of Jon. That idiot, I wish he was killed.

    22nd October, 2004
    The final days of the search are commencing, the police are getting closer and closer.. They just need to keep trying; they have already spotted him once - but they lost him. I believe they will find him, I hope they do.

    25th October, 2004
    I think, they're going to find him.
    They will - hopefully.

    29th October, 2004
    Mr. Jonathan Gordan has been found. The deadly serial killer was found in New South Wales; near the sandy beaches. He has been sent to a death sentence; and will be sentenced to death on the 29th of November, 2004.


    To be continued...
    ~ I hope you enjoyed, the second chapter of...
    Mystery of my death!

    You may of noticed; that there are tons of news reports..
    That is the style of it; because I wanted to make it surprising in a way, that information
    is given to the reader. However, it is better to put it in News style - instead of a person just saying it.
    I thought it'd be more interesting, but the news reports will stop as Mr Gordan has been caught!

    You may ask, what is going to happen now? - Now that Michael is dead..
    You'll have to keep on reading, but the diary of Michael is mysteriously being written in..
    By who knows who? Check out the 'next time' paragraph below for more details..

    NEXT TIME...

    “Thomas! Get in here.” Mum said. “What?!” replied Dad. “LOOK!” Mum replied, “WHAT THE HELL?!”..

     
  2. Xandalf

    Xandalf Donator

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    o.o
    i have no words.
    (i bet the serial killer is mappy)