Parkour [X-TREME MAZE]

Discussion in 'Map Submissions' started by Kaizerroooll, Apr 25, 2017.

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  1. Kaizerroooll

    Kaizerroooll Legend Former Sonorant In Echo Donator

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  2. Mats

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    Best parkour ever +1000
     
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  3. Syrian

    Syrian Former Mod x2 Donator

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    This looks a bit sloppy and somewhat thrown together, sorry to sound critical. I'd suggest giving a better floor, widening the walls and giving a bit of texture to the map in general. It seems like it's all dirt and wool.
     
  4. Kaizerroooll

    Kaizerroooll Legend Former Sonorant In Echo Donator

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    I didn't break the dirt cause I made it in a Singleplayer world and I didn't break it so yeah @Serayne I'll try my best if I remember to edit it <3

    Thanks :smile:
     
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  5. Rivenze

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    Nice Parkour map, but perhaps try and add a bit more detail? :)
     
  6. Stolas

    Stolas waffles > pancakes Donator

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    I think everyone is being a little nice. It's severely under detailed and the jumps are possible without sprinting. This also uses one blocks through out the entire parkour course, meaning you can't tell the jumps from the wall. There is no challenge and no goal. A personal suggestion would be to make the parkour course bigger, make the jumps wider and the platforms longer as well. I don't see "potential" from these images, but with a lot of effort and extra time, it could be better.
    Sorry if this sounds hyper-critical but it had to be said. You said you made it in single player, so you have a lot of space. Why are you confining yourself to such a small space? I get it if it's a lot of work but that is what happens when you make a parkour map for this server (or any map at all). You should start off with a void world, if you feel more safe so you don't have to worry about surroundings.
    Once again, sorry if this is hyper-critical, and don't take it personally, there is always room for improvement.
     
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    AbductedSnake Java Coder Donator

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    You need to make the parkour a bit harder.
     
  8. GalaxyPuffz

    GalaxyPuffz rip joergen Donator

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    I might sound rude but whatev,
    • The map is sloppy - I'm sorry, but look at all the other maps and you don't see constant one block jumps and aesthetically, you don't see two colors used. It's something that I would've made my first week on Minecraft, not something that should be on a professional server
    • No hard jumps - Now you can use the excuse that this is intended for 'Easy' Parkour but c'mon. This has like two kinds of jumps and has no variety
    • BORING BUILDS - I can't stress enough how important it is to have an aesthetically pleasing build that has a good theme and the whole thing coincides and flows. This is literally blue and green wool slapped down and a void.
    • Seems like a shrine to the 'builders' - Of the 25 screenshots that you provided, four of those are dedicated to showing us the builders of this map. Here's the thing, we KNOW you built it, we don't need to have a portion of what you're showing us to be the builders names. As said in the map submission form, credit WILL be given so you needn't worry.
    Overall, the build scene of Minecraft is hard and although a lot of people appreciate you trying, this map isn't going to get in no matter how nice people may seem about it. The building scene is a tough business in Minecraft and you have to be on top of the field. Hopefully you can practice and make better maps in the future.
     
  9. Reebal

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    I know you're trying, as I saw your other map request, but these aren't detailed. As you look at other parkour maps, they have detail and look nice. Your build might have hard parkour aspects but it just isn't good. Sorry.
     
  10. Stolas

    Stolas waffles > pancakes Donator

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    In a photo you supplied, a sign says "Some of my friends-"(forgot the rest). If you read the map submitting thread by Willy, which is required before you even submit a map, not to mention you didn't even follow the format. There are just too many problems with this map, but to continue on what I said it says that easter eggs are not allowed (although this is not really an easter egg, the purpose it serves is not needed). As I already have stated earlier, there is room for improvement. I know people that can load up a single player world and build this in less than 30 minutes, which displays a lack of effort. I understand if you don't have time, but people don't spend one day to make a map, sometimes they take weeks.

    If you want detail, I highly reccomend World Painter or MCEdit. Mods are also handy such as WorldEdit. All of these "plugins" can really spice up your build. If you don't know how, I will gladly give you some links to YouTube tutorials that have helped me in the past.

    The lighting is also very bad. Although Jerry and Harry will set your parkour schematic/world to daytime all the time by default, decoration lighting is always nice, but just doing lazy glowstone parkour jumps displays a lack of effort, once again.

    Once again, not to sound critical, but it needs to be said, for the best or worse.
    We're all here for you on the forums, if you ever need help with figuring something out. I am sure everyone is glad to help.

    *So, I had to fix some spelling errors, tip of the hat if you caught them quick.
     
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    KreoN Manager of Something| 9 Year Vet Donator

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    I hope this is a joke...
     
  12. Arisna

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    Its a great start to a map, and notice I said start. You could really add a lot of things to it..... the lime wool around it is just not as apealing to the eye as you think it is, lots of detail could be put in,
     
  13. Kaizerroooll

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  14. Stolas

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    This still wouldn't work.
    It resembles the parkour map "Rainbow".
    I would still highly recommend using.
     
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    This doesn't look very good, nor professional.
    Please try and make some edits.

    ~ Gavin.
     
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