My Another Try: Time Travel

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OMGGGGGGGGGGG! I like this! You deserve a cookie!

 

I started writing a new one and damn... I'm no where as committed to writing now as you xD well done :)

 

Pootis! I'm back!

Chapter 5 - The flare in the open part 1

"YOU ARE DEAD!!!" Screamed Sven angrily. "Well, I'm almost sure that I ain't, pal." said Jack sarcastically, he even grinned a bit. That pissed Sven a lot. Safoya didn't seem to understand what was going on though, who is that Jack guy and why does Sven hates him that much? Sven just didn't resist. He pulled the trigger expecting Jack's head to blow up to pieces, but for some reason, it just didn't shoot. It was out of ammo.

Sven found it very weird and at the same time scary as he knew his gun was full. "I know, the damn looters are struggling finding ammo these days, so at any occasion given, they take it." said Jack. "Who the hell are you, even?" Asked Safoya. "Me, princess, I am... The handsomest... Captain... Jack... Valdy..." Said Jack smiling, his smile quickly disappeared because Sven's fist hit him in the face. "Ouch! God dammit, simply because Louise was so damn smart to suicide herself in order to kill me, I ain't the one to blame!" Yelled Jack and punched Sven back.

"If you didn't start this evidence bullshit, none of this would've happened!" Yelled Sven back. Safoya was still very confused, who is Louise, what was the suicide... She decided that asking now would only fuel the fight between the two. "Alright, I get your God damn point! But stop that! I'm trying to..." Jack stopped talking for a second as there was someone driving a truck, it stopped in this neighbourhood. What scared Jack the most was the cage in the back of the truck... It contained a FLARE. This scary satanic creature that eat you up all together in less than 5 minutes!

The driver of the truck came out of the vehicle, he was so weird. He was equipped with a flamethrower on his back and it was painted like a zebra... Sven suddenly found out that this planet is a lot weirder than it seems. "Your carriage is there. Wasn't easy getting this sicko. Don't mess this up." The person left leaving the truck with the cage behind. "Who the hell is that?" asked Safoya. Jack didn't answer anything. He just came closer to the cage. The flare didn't seem very pleased by Jack's presence as he started showing his teeth to him. It smelled a lot. Probably because of all these people he had consumed.

"Okay, Jack. You and I need to set some things straight!" said Sven and pulled out a knife. "Say that to them" said Jack and pointed his finger at a crowd of weaponed people coming for them. Jack then pulled out the lighters and gave them to Safoya and Sven and whispered to Sven's ear: "this piece of meat is scared of fire." He then walked to the crowd.

"Talk or walk, I'm in a business affair here!" Said Jack. "These are the guys you having a deal with? There's a deal the "Horizon" proposed us. Including you. For some reason they want these two dead, they pay 600 000$ for who ever brings their two heads." Said one of these people. After overhearing this, Sven got really scared, their own people attacked them and tend to give away such an offer for their deaths! Something weird is going on in here.

"Well, I need them alive for now. Later we'll see" said Jack. The person who just talked pointed his rifle to Jack's head. "I'd rather you give me these two alive now more than you being dead. Don't mess with the rebellion. Now give me these two and get out!" Jack looked like he expected something like this. So he didn't seem very scared. He just backed off and said: "they're yours!". Both Sven and Safoya now started to hate him.

The crowd approached to them with their rifles and looked ready to shoot at any moment. At this very moment, Jack pulled out a revolver and shot a lock in the cage that freed the flare. After doing so, Jack ran towards the truck and drove off. The flare though, didn't seem to want to leave, he instead started attacking the crowd of people that wanted to kill Sven and Safoya. The neighbourhood was suddenly full of screams and blood all over the place. Everyone was struggling to get the flare but everyone missed their shots and soon were added to the pile of dead bodies.

Sven was scared the most, he had no weapon except this stupid lighter. But then he remembered Jack's quote, "this piece of meat is scared of fire". He decided to test this out, what other choice he had? Running away won't do any good. He turned the lighter on and a little bit of fire showed up and when the flare wanted to jump on him, it didn't. It was too scared, too intimidated to do so. Everyone around except Safoya were dead so Sven decided to bring the flare back to its cage.

Slowly, he made the beast go back its cage but suddenly, some more armed people like the people that just died showed up screaming "There this thing is! If we fail to kill that, Jack will be forever known as the traitor!" After these words, the flare hopped away and started killing everything it saw. There was more people than the last time but it didn't change much. A few minutes later, everyone was already dead, and the flare was heading inside the city. Sven couldn't help but think "oh my god."

Just a little plot twist, I ain't the villain in this story. Instead, the "Phoenix" group is. :3 everything will be explained soon enough.

Credits to:
@CaptainJackValdy
@LouiseXminerX
@Sven007
@TheUndeadBrave
@BlabDaFish
@Safoya
@TreeKillerMan2

 

I like that! :)

 

I don't like it. I love it.

 

Now, it's been a week. I'll do chapters one a week okay? Anyway, some moderator (won't say the name, cause I don't know who it was) messed my 4th chapter up. Now, he didn't do anything to it, he just thought that the chapter was posted by @Sven007. It ended up being deleted so if you haven't read it yet, it's here. Remember, it has a major plot twist so...

Spoiler: 4 chapter

Chapter 4 - Welcome to a hellhole, kiddos!

Sven woke up several hours after the crash. The ship was burning but didn't reach Sven yet and the exit was safe. He started looking around and noticed blood on his hands. It was his blood. His leg was bleeding, there was a large wound. He needed bandages if he planned to not die of blood loss. He started walking around the ship, he was looking for Safoya. She wasn't here. The ship landed in the middle of a desert, with sand all around. There were steps heading from the ship somewhere far. Safoya left the ship. Abandoned him.

Even if he was supposed to be mad right now, for some reason he wasn't. He didn't feel like being mad. He left the ship as well and started following the steps. After a few seconds of walk, Sven collapsed. His eyes were open but he couldn't move. He then noticed a silhouette in front of him heading for the ship, ignoring Sven completely. "Safoya... That you?" Asked Sven before collapsing again. He carried his last forces and got on his feet. It was painful. The "silhouette" wasn't Safoya at all. It was a random looter with a mask armoured with brown vest who was heading for the ship's engine to claim it.

He did it very brutally, he smacked the metal bar that was covering the engine and threw the bar away. The engine was burning but the looter was equipped with fire extinguisher and a few seconds later, the engine stopped burning. Sven was about to scream something like "HEY! What are you doing?!" but he was too tired to. Instead, he was wondering what the looter will do with such a useless piece of junk.

The next thing the looter did was weird. He came to Sven and started bandaging his leg. Sven couldn't help but think "what the hell?". The next thing the looter did was knocking Sven out. Sven didn't expect this and fell on a dusty ground. He woke up hours later. When he woke up, he was tied up and the looter was dragging him through the desert.

"So, what is going on? First you take my engine, then you bandage me and now this." said Sven. "You'll know everything when you're supposed to." answered the looter. "Okay... And when am I "supposed" to know?" Asked Sven sarcastically. "If you won't shut up, I will stab you. This isn't what he wants, but I sometimes just don't care." said the looter. Sven wondered who that "he" might be. They walked another few hours and arrived to some sort of city.

There was a sign near where they were walking. It said: "Welcome to Hellhole!". Sven couldn't help but grin. What moron would EVER think of calling a city like that. It was dark when they finally arrived. In the city, no one seemed to mind the fact that there's a PERSON being dragged through the city. Sven wasn't really surprised though, he knew that these sorts of things are normal here.

The looter dropped Sven on the ground, untied him and left. Like if nothing happened. "You're here too!" Screamed a familiar voice. It was Safoya. She was behind him. This was rather weird, Safoya being EXACTLY where the random weirdo dropped him. He was glad she was okay, though."How the hell you've here?!" Asked Safoya. "I don't know, some random weirdo dragged me here. And you?" Asked Sven. "Same... Whatever this is, it's very weird. Who would ever want us here?" Safoya was interrupted by her contacting device. It was Bruno.


"I hired them, these people who got you here are my people, sorry if they were rough on you, but that was the most discreet way to get you without someone noticing. I was about to send you a vehicle, but after this assault, I thought someone was hunting you guys. Believe me, this was the safest way." After these words, everything became clear. But didn't stop Sven from being pissed off.

"Anyway, there's a radar in your equipment, it should guide you to a map device vital for our mission. Find it. Bruno, finished." As Bruno said so, there was a radar device, they followed where it told them to go through the city. They arrived in a neighbourhood with two houses. Both wrecked. "And it's here... The map thingy?" Said Safoya. "Yes." Said someone behind them. The two turned around. Sven was shocked. There was an explosion of emotions, most of them being negative. His hand automatically got itself to a gun and he started pointing it at him. It was...

Jack. "Missed me fellas?"

Now for the actual chapter.

Chapter 6 - The flare in the open, Part 2

The entire city was soon filled with screams of pain and fear. It was also filled with gunshots and explosions. Sven couldn't move at all hearing all these sounds. He was sad, scared, angry and also somewhat happy at the same time. He wasn't happy for the fact that people were dying, but, even though it's extremely weird, for the fact that Jack was alive. He hates him, yes. But if not for him, this bunch would probably kill them already. That didn't excuse what he did though. He killed Louise, Undead and Nala. That is unforgivable.

"WAKE UP, GOD DAMNIT!!" Screamed Safoya. She took the guns from the dead people and gave one to Sven. "Whoever the hell this Jack guy is, there's a god damn flare running around! We must stop it!" Sven didn't move a bit. Safoya started to get really irritated so she kicked him in the leg. That would gave an effect immediately. "What's wrong with you?!" yelled Sven. Safoya ignored it completely.

She instead headed towards the city where the flare was heading. Sven decided to follow her. At this moment, the previous person, the one with a flamethrower painted zebra showed up. This time, the "zebrathrower" wasn't on his back but instead in his hands and it was pointed towards Safoya and Sven. "What do you want?" Asked Sven. "Come with me, and no one will be harmed." He answered. After saying that, he pointed his finger towards the vehicle behind one of the buildings. This was an another trap, obviously, but it's either that or being burned to death like Duck from "Mad Max".

Sven headed towards the vehicle but Safoya didn't give up so easily. She shot that person in the shoulder making him scream of pain. Drops of blood were visible on the ground. That person dropped the his flamethrower and held his shoulder. The two used that opportunity to escape from him. They were running a few minutes and the screams were heard closer and closer. At this moment, they've met an another group of local mercenaries similar to those who were killed by the flare a few minutes ago.

"Hey! There's our walking 600 000$! Get 'em!" At this command, the entire group started shooting them but they had enough time to get to cover. Sven was shooting back and killed a few of them. Like if they didn't have enough problems yet, a flare showed up in the street. Because of the reflex, Sven took out the lighter but to his bad luck, it didn't turn on! "Hey, pass me your lighter!" Screamed Sven at Safoya. "What?!" Responded Safoya. "Your god damn lighter! Pass me it!" Screamed Sven even louder. "What?! I can't hear you over these screams!!" Safoya screamed back.

At this moment, the flare noticed them and was running towards them. Sven tried to shoot but the flare was dodging every shot. Now, Sven thought it was the end. Death by a bloody flare. That's ridiculous! After all he went through! Looks like he didn't make it this time. His thoughts about how horribly he will die were interrupted by the sounds of a vehicle. The same one that the person with the flame thrower showed. The vehicle smacked the flare away and driver of this vehicle got out of the vehicle and knocked Sven out. It was the same person that was shot in the shoulder, five minutes ago.

He woke up tied up and inside of the vehicle. There were no screams anymore. Sven tried to ask what the hell is going on but couldn't because his mouth was tied up as well. He looked around. There were driving somewhere in the abandoned part of the city. There were no people what so ever. Safoya sat next to him. She was still unconscious. They were driving like this for a few more minutes until they finally arrived to their destination. The bar called "The Lucky Child".


Credits to:
@CaptainJackValdy
@LouiseXminerX
@Sven007
@TheUndeadBrave
@BlabDaFish
@Safoya
@TreeKillerMan2

 

"He"
;-;
I'm a dude now ;---;

 

Ready for some more brainf**ks? Cause there's gonna be two more since the 4th chapter! Haha! This entire story is reflecting JJ Abrams' opinions about stories, that everything should come as a surprise. Although, this might've been expected (at least one of them), still, I consider them useful. So les begin!

Chapter 7 - What are the god damn odds?

The driver of the vehicle opened the doors letting both Sven and Safoya out. He was pointing his flame thrower to Sven in order to make him get out. This way turned out to be pretty effective as Sven got out of the car almost instantly, not because he was scared of this thing that spits fire but rather because there was no much other option. It didn't work with Safoya because she was still unconscious.

"Carry her." said the driver. Sven was about to reply "do it yourself" but couldn't because his mouth was tied up. With no much choice left, he eventually came to pick her up. At this moment, a familiar truck has stopped nearby with a familiar man driving it. Jack. "Hey fellas! See you're having fun over here (he stopped the truck and came out of it). That's good, having fun upgrades the mood. Good mood equals good moments in your crappy..." Jack was interrupted by the driver's blank stare. Even though he couldn't see their face, it was easy to guess its expression.

"Alright, I guess Sven would carry her inside the bar, won't ya, Sev?" asked Jack grinning. Sven replied with the same blank stare. Not saying anything more, Jack simply headed for the entrance of the bar, the guy with a "zebra thrower" followed him. Sven picked Safoya up and followed them as well. It was quite difficult with the hands tied up but he still managed to. However, Sven realized that no one is seeing them. And that this place was cut off from the city, they could simply run away. Wishing himself luck, he started to run.

That's when he heard a gunshot and have noticed a hole in the ground, most certainly caused by the bullet shot right now. The sniper behind him confirmed that. Somewhat intimidated, Sven, slowly, was heading towards the bar. The sniper, unlike most of the people in Hellhole, didn't have a mask on. His face was bearded and looked somewhat old, but younger than the one of Jack's.

When finally arrived next to the door, the sniper opened it for Sven letting him in first. The entire place was wrecked and looked very similar to the bar on "Horizon" where Sven would meet with Bruno. Inside, he was greeted by the hated Jack, by the guy with a flame thrower (still wearing his mask) and an another person that Sven didn't recognize, probably the owner of the bar. There were a lot of chairs but not that many tables.

"Have a seat!" Said Jack cheerfully. Sven didn't listen. He put Safoya on a chair but himself, he was standing. "Well, I guess you could stand for a few minutes... Anyway, Killy, be a dear, get rid of his strings, I don't like them not being able to talk or anything." after saying this, the sniper started to smile, he pulled out a knife and cut the strings that tied his hands and his mouth. Seconds after, he was about to receive a punch to the face but "Killy" had dodged the hit and hit him back. Jack looked somewhat disappointed.

"Sven, it's Bruno! Respond!" said Bruno from the contacting device that Sven had. "We don't need you for now, B." Said Jack and got up from his chair, took the device from Sven's hands and threw it away, breaking it. All you could hear was Bruno saying: "Wait, no!" But that sound was immediately gone. What surprised Sven the most was the fact that that he called Bruno-B. Which meant that he probably knows who Bruno is.

"Now, this lil' cupcake refuses to wake up." Said Jack referencing to Safoya. "Well, I guess we'll do it the classical way, Sven. Man-to-Man." "Oh, so girls don't get included right?" said the guy with the flamethrower in a weirdly girly voice. Sven knew he heard this voice somewhere. He (the guy with the flamethrower) threw the mask away revealing a face of a girl. Not just some girl, but Blab in bloody person! The person he knew! "You're here as well?!" asked Sven. "Well, duh! Why wouldn't I? I also want some fun killing things hehe". answered Blab.

Sven didn't know what else to expect, a god damn Louise coming back to life? "Oh, I see you're thinking of good stuff at last" said some ghostly voice that apparently only he have heard. "I know all of this comes as a shocker, but what we're about to do is even crazier-" The ghostly voice stopped being interrupted by an another female voice that everyone heard this time. "-We're about to do some massive damage to the time-continuum!" After saying this, an another girl showed up with a red t-shirt. It was. Louise.

So what's with those "telepathic" skills Louise has? Who the hell is Killy? Why is everything so conveniently there? Why are they all here? Next chapter will answer several of your queshes!

Credits to:
@CaptainJackValdy
@LouiseXminerX
@Sven007
@TheUndeadBrave
@BlabDaFish
@TreeKillerMan2
@Safoya

And a new member of the team

@Killy_Kiid

 

xD nice

 

Finally. Nice chapter!

 

Woah, this thread has 480+ views! Woah, never thought this story is gonna be this popular. Thanks! :)

Chapter 8 - The true face of the Phoenix

Sven couldn't help but run and hug Louise. He ran to her and the two hugged each other. Jack felt somewhat rejected. Sven would notice the fact that Jack is a little jealous of the privilege that Sven had. "Alright, alright, alright. Enough of hugs for today" yelled Jack separating Sven and Louise. "I thought you were dead!" shouted Sven. When Louise was about to respond, she was interrupted by Jack. "Yeah, you thought I was dead as well except for a hug I received a fist to the face." Louise seemed disappointed.

That's when Safoya woke up. "Finally, I felt like she's gonna miss all the fun" said Blab sarcastically. Killy came up to Safoya and cut the ropes that were attached to her hands and mouth. "What the hell is goin on?" Asked Safoya. But no one felt like answering. Everyone was concentrated on each other. Sven was concentrated on Louise, he wanted to know why she would stay with a prick like Jack. Jack was concentrated on both Louise and Sven, he didn't trust neither of them and Louise was concentrated on Jack. She knew how Jack is unpredictable.

"Umm... Is the starring contest over?" asked Killy. Jack heard that and decided to stop this nonsense. "Alright, even though I kinda hate you both, I'll go easy..." "Why are you with that scum? You know what he did to us! Because of him, Undead and Nala are dead!" Shouted Sven. Louise didn't answer. She did the same as Jack. <<Went easy>>. "Alright Jack, I know something fishy is going on here! The Phoenix for some reason hunt me down, I find myself kidnaped by some psychotic pyro who is Blab and I'm almost sure you know Bruno. Now tell me what's going on here!"

Safoya was still a little sleepy so she didn't mind much the conversation. "What's going on...? None of your bloody business. I hacked through some of your info pages on Horizon and eventually learned the details about your mission. And it's in your interests not asking anymore questions because I have what Bruno wanted you to find..." Finished Jack and shown the map device that Bruno meant Sven and Safoya to find. "Give it to me!" Yelled Sven and jumped on Jack but Jack pulled out his gun and aimed it on the device. "One more step, and this thing has a hole inside. You will do as we say, or your mission is failed.".

"You're with him?!" Shouted Sven at Louise. "You're with that prick! Why won't you tell me what's going on, really?!" Louise remained calm and simply said "You're too dangerous with that info". "There are Phoenix hunting you guys, these guys are the real enemies right now." said Blab. "Yeah, yeah. Anymore lies, anyone?" said Sven and Jack covered his face with his hand in disappointment and left the bar whispering "what did I do to deserve this?" He continued louder "I'll smoke outside for a few minutes. The <<anti-lies>> will be not far from here in two hours, I suggest you get ready." he opened and the door and closed it behind him.

During the time of preparation, Safoya has finally woke up entirely and Sven told her what happened and why they can't leave and are forced to stay with Jack's crew. During this time, Killy gave Safoya and Sven magnums to "defend themselves". He also warned that using this to kill them is a bad idea.

One hour and a half have passed and everyone came in the truck that Jack arrived here with. They were driving in this wasteland for 15 minutes until they arrived on top of a cliff of some sort. From this cliff, they could see a house that a wealthy family lived in. "Alright, sports, what you're about to see is some heavy shit. But, we can't let ourselves get revealed because we are allied with the rebellion against the Phoenix and if they know that we knew about this attack with out letting them know, we will have a bad time, got it?" said Jack. Safoya nodded. Sven didn't say anything.

After waiting 15 minutes, Sven saw two Phoenix trucks heading for that house. The soldiers were all armed. "The hell are they doing..." Thought Sven and then the soldiers started shooting the adults in the house. Sven have gotten a burst of negative emotions. The people he had worked for, are murderers and thugs... he saw more hatred and when he saw a kid being beaten up by them Sven just didn't resist. "That's it..." He took his gun out and started running there. "HEY!! STOP!!" Shouted Louise. Safoya decided to follow Sven because she was also really heart-broken. "The rebellion is gonna kill us..." said Jack nervously laughing.

So remember when I said that the next chapter is gonna answer questions...? Well, I lied xD
But hey, you have solid proof that Phoenix are bad in this scenario, but why? Who is this rebellion? And what will it do when they realize we didn't warn them about it? O.O

Credits to:
@CaptainJackValdy
@LouiseXminerX
@Sven007
@TheUndeadBrave
@BlabDaFish
@TreeKillerMan2
@Safoya
@Killy_Kiid

omg pls someone reply, this story is very far it can't die now I don't wanna break rules to keep it floating pls pls pls

 

Nuuuuuu! ;-;
I double posted. Please don't make me do that again. I don't want to have a warning. Thanks. Anyway, enjoy an another chapter. :D (Reply pls)


Chapter 9 - The rebellion's move

The two intrepid Phoenix agents were sprinting to the battlefield in order to stop this phoenix's assault. Equipped with nothing but a worthless revolver, they joined the fight. "Who the hell is that?!" screamed one of the soldiers, probably the officer. He started shooting Sven and Safoya but they just had enough time to duck behind a rock. Safoya shot back and got the officer in the head. It blew up to pieces. The bloody mess attracted other soldiers and now the serious combat started.

"So, what do we do now?" asked Blab, "cause clearly if those rebel idiots know about this, we're as good as dead...". "Hey, we can always just abandon them! Pretend we never saw this! Huh?" said Jack laughing. Everyone gave him a blank stare meaning that that's just stupid. "Well... We can always pretend that we just noticed this attack and call them right now!" said Jack, and instead of the first reply, everyone felt like this was a pretty good idea. "Ok, I'm callin' the..." Jack was interrupted by an explosion right next to him.

"You traitor!" screamed someone a few meters away from them. "Great..." said Louise. "The rebellion! Stop this assault at all costs! Me, I'll deal with the traitors!" He screamed once again and after saying this, an army of people with iron armor joined Sven and Safoya in the battlefield. Even a mecha joined the battle! (It's a giant robot with giant feet, large cannons in hands and rocket launchers on its shoulders. It's controlled by someone who is inside this robot) The man who commanded the army to go attack approached Jack.

"Oh, cmon pal. Forgive an old sack of silliness this little..."Jack was about to finish his sentence but he was interrupted by a punch to the face. "You stupid traitor! How much of an idiot I was to trust you!" He then picked up a pistol and started aiming it at Blab and Louise, both of which didn't seem to care. "You deserve to die, once this battle ends, I'll execute you infront of the owners of this building to show them that traitors like you will die." Said the rebel commander.

Sven has never had so much fun in his entire life, he ran like crazy shooting the Phoenix soldiers and when the rebellion joined the fight, that fun was doubled. He didn't care enough yet that those were the rebels and that they are in some deep trouble now, for now, he was enjoying his portion of fun. The battle ended with the mecha blowing up the two trucks and the Phoenix soldiers that survived were fleeing. The Rebels were celebrating their victory along with Sven and Safoya.

That's when Louise showed up with Jack and Blab. "You have fought with courage. Sadly, there are cowards like them that don't have it (the rebel commander pointed his finger at Jack), they were about to leave an entire building die, so now they will die." Finished the rebel commander and took out his pistol. Sven and Safoya showed up. "Hey, you won't kill them!" Yelled Safoya "those are our friends!" "I appreciate your courage in trying to save this building from the evil Phoenix but you must understand, your "friends" need to be executed." Jack couldn't help but grin.

"Tell me why? You could spare me..."said Jack, laughing a little. "Cowards like you, shouldn't be spared." Said the rebel commander, took out his gun and shot Jack in the stomach. "Ouch!" Was the only thing Jack said. He soon got up and said "you know that this thing can hurt you right?". "What? You're alive!" Said the rebel commander. "Yep, I am." The commander didn't understand. He started shooting Jack repeatedly but except of Jack saying "ouch!", nothing happened. He aimed at his head for a final shot. "If you do that, you'll regret it." Said Louise calmly. The commander didn't mind. That's when Sven realized that Killy wasn't in there...

The commander was about to pull the trigger but someone shot the gun out of his hands. There was soon an another gunshot that killed one of the rebel soldiers. The third one that killed the mecha driver. In the end the entire army along with the residents of the building were fleeing. The only people remaining were Sven, Safoya, Jack, Blab, Louise and the rebel commander. It was Killy and his sniper rifle shooting the soldiers. "How are you not dead..." Asked the rebel commander panicking. "Magic, pal. Magic." Replied Jack.

Magic... what the hell is this magic? I don't know (lol jk I know even Louise does xd)

Credits to:
@CaptainJackValdy
@LouiseXminerX
@Sven007
@TheUndeadBrave
@BlabDaFish
@TreeKillerMan2
@Safoya
@Killy_Kiid

 

Good chapter!

 

Because you asked me to.

 

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Chapter 10 - Journey begins

The rebel commander still didn't really understand what happened, neither did Sven or Safoya. However Louise, Killy and Blab acted completely normal, like if this was supposed to happen like this. Jack approached the gun that the commander dropped, checked its ammunition and put the gun in his pocket. "Seriously pal. I thought the rebellion weren't as selfish as everyone said. I didn't want to believe them, I truly didn't. Well, turns out I was wrong. You're as selfish as my long dead hamster." Said Jack.

Sven knew that something scary will happen. He knew Jack too well, this guy is unpredictable. Jack aimed the gun at the commander's head, he was now full of fear. He was sweating, shaking and murmuring prayers. His eyes widely open staring at the gun were full of tears, it was painful to watch. "HAHAHAHA!" Laughed Jack and threw the gun away. "No one cares about your life anyway so, why should I?" Said Jack and started walking away, laughing. Killy seemed disappointed, Blab didn't feel anything. It was hard to understand what Louise was feeling.

The commander's hand slowly started approaching the gun Jack threw away. Safoya noticed this and was about to take the gun away but Killy made her stop. The commander grabbed the pistol and shot Jack in the back. Apart from "ouch!", nothing else happened. But Jack stopped laughing, took out his gun, pointed it at the commander's head and this time, he shot. "I WAS ABOUT TO LET YOU LIVE!!!" Shouted Jack "Why you had to keep that hate in you! Couldn't you just forget about this?! God DAMNIT!!" He shot twice more to make sure the rebel commander died. For the first time in his whole life, Sven seemed to understand Jack. "I told you, if you let them live, they shoot you in the back." said Killy.

"So what's with all that invincibility you have?" asked Safoya. It was clearly not the best moment to ask, so Louise took his place at explaining what's going on. "We're Ilusions. We don't really exist, we can interact with you, but we aren't alive. We both died in that fall." Louise explained. While explaining, Jack was smoking in the distance. "No, but, these people never make peace with past, do they?" Jack was murmuring "I was about let this sucker live! But no... he bloody had to!" Blab and Killy approached Jack and started talking about something.

"So, Bruno send us here for you?" asked Sven. "Yes, we are illusions, but as long as Jack and I exist I this form, Tree Killer won't stop. He wants to be immortal like us, we can't let him." said Louise. "So, we just need to kill him?" Sven asked. "Oh, hell no! This guy has the ability to control time, you got a lucky shot on him, he returns five minutes back and now he knows what to do and so on and on." Said Blab "The only way to stop all this madness is by reversing time." What? Thought Sven. I'd better get some explanations. "So... does that mean that Labyrinth of the Flaming Bird is a lie?" asked Safoya looking almost sad. "What Labyrinth? Is that what Bruno said to you? HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAA" Laughed Jack out loud showing that yes, the labyrinth is a lie.

Jack calmed down, and got back to Sven. "You know those giant freaky things called the Flares? Well, they came from my time traveling portal. Because Phoenix are apparently very smart and thought that my portal would get them millions of dollars... That's called instant karma." Explained Jack. "Bruno sent you to get rid of flares and bring me and Louise... and Undead back to life." Sven still didn't understand how this time traveling works, but at least now he knows why he's here in the first place.


"Hey, but why do you want to get back to normal?" asked Safoya "You're immortal etc." "At first, I thought that as well, but we soon realized that being an illusion sucks because we can't feel anything. Food's taste became crap, water doesn't even taste anything, smoke is nothing. We wanna be alive" Jack explained "So I build a time traveling portal..." "But why should we be helping you, Jack? I hate you and you god damn know it." asked Sven "By saving me, you save Louise and Undead as well. Two for one, buddy!" Said Jack smiling.

What Sven hated about this is that Jack had a point. "Alright, I never tried the mecha yet, and this is an opportunity I won't miss!" said Blab and ran towards the mecha. "We have a long road in front of us." said Louise. "This journey, we won't forget even in the past"


This is gonna be fun, wouldn't it be. Oh, and yeah, make peace with past, sometimes it makes life easier ;)


Credits to:
@CaptainJackValdy
@LouiseXminerX
@Sven007
@TheUndeadBrave
@BlabDaFish
@TreeKillerMan2
@Safoya
@Killy_Kiid

 

Good chapter!
But hopefully, you showed this to Louise before posting it, for her confirmation that this is why Louise is back.

 

I feel like using someone's story on itsjerryandharry for an English assignment.

 

We talked about it in the private convo, she knows about it and it was mainly her idea :)

 

Nice!