5th Story: The Planets Of Shadows

I am rlly looking forward to the final chapter

 

awesome story continue to make more!! your an amazing writer!

 

Mememe!

 

This.. Is... SPAR- jk, this is really good :D i luved it

 

Wow, the replies just keep on coming. I'm so happy all of you like it. I'm getting famous, arn't I? xD
Anyway, guess what? THE FINAL CHAPTER IS HERE!
Time flies by, doesn't it?
So yeah. Final Chapter going to be extra long of course to make it the best, and a new story is coming soon!
Characters:
@LouiseXminerX
@Radii
@xX0Sven0Xx
@Ninjaman
@nala
@TheUndeadBrave
@TheBlackHamood
@Arelane
@BunnySellz
@IDeadlyFighterI
@Kazuke
@Blumeire
@Chazzvid
@Brynstar
@SS_Ace
@NINJANAYLIN123
@Cally8484
New Character:
@???
Read this chapter to find out who's in it.
Hope you all enjoy :DDD
NOW LET'S BEGIN!

CHAPTER 20 - THE FINAL COUNTDOWN
I looked out of the window, and the place seemed to be empty. All I saw in my view was a desert. Everyone got out, but before I could hop off, something grabbed me. No one realised I was missing.
"Shh..." The figure whispered. It let go of me, and I turned around. "I see your going to wake the Great God Alien, right?" It whispered. "I guess..." I wondered. "Be careful which orb you put on it." It said. "Orb? Wait wait, who the hell are you?" I questioned. "Konohito, the last Alpha alive." Kono smiled. "Alpha? Wait... Your the last one!" I cried. "Louise? Where are you." I heard Radii shout. "I got to go. I guess I'll see you later I guess?" I said with a wobbly smile." She waved and I hopped out. "Louise what took so long?" BlackHamood questioned. "I left something behind... Anyway lets go." I scratched my head with a smile.
We walked and the warm air started to heat our bodies. Chazz scanned the distance. "A frozen life has been found." He pointed. We pointed at something in the distance... As we walked while our legs were killing us, a stone as large was the tallest tower on earth stood. I saw a hole at the front of us. "It looks like we need to place something in there..." Sven explained. "Everyone, split up. Go and look for something that could fit in there." DeadlyFighter said. We nodded and we walked in different directions. I found a cave with sandstone around it. Before I could enter it something was glowing... a very rainbow colours was shining in the distance. I was about to walk towards it, until Queen Nala shouted. "I found some red orb!"
We all met in a group and the orb seemed to contain some fire inside. "Not sure if this is a good idea..." King Undead sighed. "Nonsence! This fits perfectly in the hole." As we all started to complain whether or not we should place the orb inside, I noticed Kono, stand beside the stone. Everyone saw her and freaked out. DeadlyFIghter got his gun out. "WAIT WAIT! She's ain't evil. She's the last Alpha..." I explained. DeadlyFighter slowly put his gun back in his belt. "Alpha?" Bryn wondered. "Yes... NO! DON'T-" Queen Nala placed the orb in the stone, and the orb glowed. Kono frowned. "What?" Queen Nala smiled. "That is the orb of anger. Now the alien will-" The stone collapsed and the orb entered the heart of a giant alien.
The alien roared and spoke "The orb of anger shall guide me to give revenge!" It shouted. It shot lasers onto the ground, almost chopping off our feet. Fire started to glow and surround the beast. I got my fire blade out. I tried to reach for the beast's legs, but Kazuke grabbed me. "We're not here to destroy it! We need it to stop the meteorites!" Kazuke shouted. I saw a glowly red star in the sky, and that's when I knew the meteorites were coming. "Oh great god alien! Please help us!" Bunny cried. The alien ignored her and cut a huge pilar in half. The pillar was about to squish her, until Deadly grabbed her just in time. The alien fired out its eyes, aobut to shoot larger lasers at all of us, until some lasers shot it instead. It roared. I looked up, and a little ship appeared. That's when I saw SS_Ace, NinjaNaylan and Cally in the ship. "Told you we'd be fine!" SS_Ace laughed. The lasers wern't actually hurting the alien, it was calming it down. It started to get tired... But ships shot the ship SS_Ace, NinjaNaylan and Cally were in, and it crashed in front of us. Bryn broke the windows and got them out. They were okay, but they had some injuries. "Bunny, take them to a safe place and take care of them!" BlackHamood demanded. Bunny nodded and Bunny held SS_Ace while Radii also carried Cally and NinjaNaylan. The ships then landed and 100s of guards started shooting bullets at us. DeadlyFighter created a shield around us, making the bullets bounced back at the guards. "NinjaMan and Arelane..." Sven pointed.
NinjaMan and Arelane marched out of the ship with evil smiles. The orb inside the alien was actually starting to crawl out. "Great Alien! They tried to kill me!" Arelane shouted. "What?" The alien said. Before the orb could crawl out, the orb entered it's body again. "NO ONE HURTS ARELANE!" It shouted. It stepped on the shield, and it broke, but Chazz was storng and he was holding the foot on top of us. "GO!" He shouted. We all ran out and the jet packs on Chazz's back got him out just in time before the foot could end us. NinjaMan got behind me and punched me to the ground. Before my friends could help me, the alien grabbed them. They screamed. NinjaMan kicked me, and pain started to come. "You thought you can just walk on this planet and save the day huh?" NinjaMan laughed. I dropped my fireblade and it was near Arelane. He grabbed it and activated it. He walked closer to me. "Time to end your life..." NinjaMan grabbed me, but he was too strong for me to escape. Arelane was about to stab me in the heart, until Kono kicked him in mid air and grabbed me fireblade. NinjaMan let go of me, making me fall to the ground with such force. Kono helped me get up, and Kono got a bottle of some mysterious water and she threw the bottle at the fire that surrounded the alien. The water spreaded and made the fire fall, and she stabbed the alien in the foot with the fireblade. The alien let go of my friends and landed on the guards. The rest of the guards kept shooting, but Kazuke made a shield around my friends.
"The shield is getting weak!" He shouted. "Louise... find the orb of light." Kono said. "The what?" I wondered. "The orb of light..." She repeated. She ran and took care of the guards, while I was confused. But I remembered the light I saw before... so without hesitation I ran off. "Louise, where are you going?" Bryn asked. "Light!" I shouted.
I entered the same cave I saw before, and the light grew brighter. I walked slowly to the light and found a orb with colours I've never seen before inside. I grabbed it and ran, and the shield around my friends broke. The alien grabbed Chazz. The alien threw Chazz into a deep lake of water behind the alien. "NOOO!" Bryn screamed. I couldn't believe it... I just couldn't walk, like my legs were super glued to the floor. I just... what is happening?
I finally snapped out of it and ran to the lake. I saw Chazz's body float to the bottom of the lake. He... was dead.
Before I could cry, I heard something at the bottom of the lake... Something like... 'Emergency... Rocket...' Wait a second. But before I could realise what he was going to do, He blasted into the air. His arm changed into missiles and lots of rockets shot the alien in the head. The alien then went unconscious and was about to fall... ON ME.
It's body was too big to run from. I kneeled down, scared and frightenned. "LOUISE!" My friends called. They then got grabbed by the guards before they could help me. Then, Kono pushed me, and the body landed.
Was I dead? Was I... in hell? I openned my eyes, I seemed to be on the sand, but as I turned around, the body has already fallen. But... someone was under it.
Radii helped me get up, while DeadlyFighter grabbed the orb and placed it in the alien while the orb of anger escaped. The alien stood up, and I saw Kono on the ground. As Bunny came back with NinjaNaylan, SS_Ace and Cally, Bunny grabbed Kono. "KONO! SPEAK TO ME!" I cried. She openned her eyes just a bit. "Lou... Louise... I'll always... be there... for..." And before her eyes could close, she whispered 'you.'
We all knelled down while silent tears dropped onto the floor. "This is... Agent Kazuke... The last Alpha is gone." Kazuke sighed in the radio. "Aye... Wait... 5 MORE MINUTES UNTIL THE METEROITES LAND!" We all panicked, but then the guards then grabbed us, covering our mouths. Arelane stood in front of us, smiling. "The alien can't hear you. Which means you can hear your graves coming." The alien looked at us. "What are you doing Arelane?" The alien asked. "Relax..." Arelane smiled. Then, one of the guards shot a massive needle into the alien, making the alien fall again and sleep. "Now... Let us die!" Arelane laughed. Minutes past, and the meteorites was just about to hit the planets. I punched the guard and I shouted. "SAVE US!" The alien heard me, and it immediately stood up and created a shield around all the planets.
The planet was untouched, and we survived. The guards disappeared and Arelane and NinjaMan wasn't evil anymore. "Now nothing can hurt you." The alien smiled. The alien then waved, and we all suddenly disappeared.
I woke up, and Radii did as well. "What?" I wondered. "The alien... must have transported us all on our planets." Radii sighed. "I'll really miss my friends..." I sighed. "Wait..." Radii went outside and so did I, and a massive space ship appeared. "We can always visit them..." I smiled, and I could tell everyone else on each planet also smiled.
The End.
I hope you enjoyed, next story is coming tomorrow.
~LouiseXminerX

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Great ending! I love it!

 

Yay! Death!
Oh and I loved the ending!

 

Hey guys, I'm so glad you all liked the last chapter
The reason why the ending was a bit... undetailed was because before I replied the chapter was alot longer and detailed, but I hit the 10000 characters limit, so I had to delete some parts, like when we went to another planet and got all this diamond and gold.
But I hope you all still liked this chapter ^-^ And remember to come online tomorrow (Or possibly the day after) For my 6th Story!

 

So I Instantly Became Good? :3 I Hope in Next Story I Will be More Like a Smart and unhonorable villain. Anyways, It's the best Book i ever rode :D
(even if it had some little mistakes)

 

Awesome ending Louise! Might be the best one yet!
But I've got a question; since I was a human, does that mean i was transported back to Earth or Kye?

 

Here's the story:
You were first born on earth, but then got kidnapped and you were taken to Planet Kye. You were a slave to @Arelane but Queen @nala saved you when you were kids. And as you grew older, Nala got married to someone but died due to a fire that happened 100 years ago (If you forgot, Alpha's can live for 100 of years) so she *cough* married you.
So you used to be on earth, until Arelane took you.
Also Nala was kidnapped before you were as well, so she wasn't a Alpha as well.
So yeah, hope that answered your question ^-^

 

Is this getting published I would love to buy a copy

 

Ooooo... i got slaves :P @TheUndeadBrave go do my homework xD

 

Thanks for the info!

I will do nothing of the sort! xD