New Story: The Dragon Of Time

I would love another story! I feel like no one is liking it because it is towards the end and they can't be in the story.

 

Are you kidding me?! We all loved that story it's so addicting, I unwatch other threads to keep up with the story
Don't put yourself down, we don't hate, we all family

 

You can't stop making these storied, they're really good!

 

Yaay, final chapter is here ^_^
and yes, I have made the final chapter, but I'm quite unsure if I'm going to make more stories after this.
But anyway, Characters:
@LouiseXminerX
@MappyTurtle
@Katy9078
@Nicki1337
@Lyncx
@Tristen690
@Xx_HaLl_Of_FaMe_xX
@BowlingMaster10
@TheBlackHamood
@connorh
@Sanadz
@TheUndeadBrave
@hammiestar
Enjoy :D

Final Chapter - The Victory Or Failure
"BlackHamood, go and stop HallOfFame." I ordered. He nodded and rushed to HallOfFame. "Stop this at once, or you will receive harm!" BlackHamood shouted. "Oh please, why don't you just watch with me and have a cup of tea." HallOfFame laughed. "Never!" BlackHamood shouted, but as he was about to punch HallOfFame, he just stepped aside, and then kicked him, making him fall. Tristen was hiding, and saw BlackHamood on the ground. He quickly helped him get up without him looking. "Arg, Sanad, destroy-" "SSSS!" Connor kept chasing Sanad until Sanad fell, making Connor grab him, and threw him out the door, making the doors shut as tight as it could. Connor then turned back to normal. "Well, got to go." HallOfFame laughed. He pushed a button on the machine and quickly operated his jetpack, mmaking him blast off out of the emergency door. "Connor, help me unlock the code to stop it from controlling the dragon." BlackHamood. They kept pushing all the buttons on the machine, but nothing was working. The Dragon was going nuts, blowing flames everywhere. "We have got to find it's weak spot." Katy shouted.
"Oh no, in 10 minutes, this machine will make the Dragon freeze everyone and everything... FOREVER!" BlackHamood panicked. "Son, we better unlock this code or we're done." Connor hissed. They kept checking ever part of the machine, but no matter what button they push, the password is always in the way.
We were getting wiped out. Most of us were unconsious, only me, Mappy and Undead was left. "I'll distract him, you go and try and find away to find it's weak spot!" Undead said. He waved his hands up, running around, but it didn't last long when the Dragon just blew fire at him. The Dragon moved closer and closer... Until Mappy ran up his tail, onto his back. He threw a rope around his next, then took control of the Dragon. "Destroy the Machine! GO" Mappy shouted. It stared into space, wondering where the machine was. "30 SECONDS LEFT UNTIL IT FREEZES EVERYTHING!" BlackHamood shouted. The Dragon finally saw the machine through the window, he charged at the wall, smashing threw it, then he stepped on the machine hard. "3... 2... 1... Maching Shutting Down. Shutting Doooww-" Until it stopped. The Dragon snapped out of it. Suddenly, a small TV in the corner of the room was moving... And we saw the people on earth, finally moving. Everyone woke up. "He he, your not finished yet!" A speaker on the other corner of the room spoke. Then, a huge iron door, opened, with a huge metal monster, ready to fight.
It punched the Dragon hard, making the people on earth freeze again. "Oh no..." I realised. Nicki screamed.
"Connor, get weapons, Katy, find the Monster's weakspot. Bowling, find a way to distract the monster, and Mappy, try and keep controlling the Dragon." He shouted. "Okay! But this is just AWESOME!" Mappy screamed from above, still on the Dragon's back. I was wondering about something, and I could tell Hammie could see me worried. "What's wrong?" She wondered. "I don't understand. How could the Dragon freeze everyone but us?" I replied. "Maybe cause we're special." Hammie said. I was wondering if that was true, but that didn't last for long when the monster almost stepped on us. "I found lots of cool weapons here." Connor said. He layed the weapons on the ground, making all of us grab them. "Aha! The weak point is on its heart. Perhaps a bullet or sword that could enter the heart would end it." Katy said.
I guess we weren't the best people who could control swords and guns. half of us were terrible at aiming, while the other half couldn't reach the heart, since the monster was like 20 feet tall.
Mappy was having a blast though. She kept screaming and going crazy on the Dragon's back. "Dodge! OK Punch! It's like I'm the main character in a video game... AWWEEESOME!!!" Mappy screamed.
Bowling kept running and waving his hands up, but the monster wouldn't pay him attention. "Want a lollipop?" He asked, holding up a 2 week old, chewed on lollipop. The monster got it's attention and went to grab the lollipop. Undead shot its heart, but it only weakened the monster a bit. "Looks like we need 1 more bullet or sword into the heart!" Katy said.
When the monster tasted the lollipop, he became mad, punching Bowling. Nicki tickled its leg, making is laugh, but then she got kicked. Then the monster saw ME! He grabbed me, sniffed me, and then was about to eat me, when I threw the sword at its heart. That's when he froze, and turned into goo, and melted down onto the floor, making me in the middle of the goo. "Eww..." I said. Everyone cheered, when I thought they were laughing at me, but that's when I realised they were cheering because we saved the day! But that didn't last long. The Dragon was almost dead. "We isn't gonna last for long..." Mappy cried. "So we didn't save the day?" Nicki sobbed. "I'm afraid so." BlackHamood said. Then, hammie froze... then Undead... then Connor. Everyone froze, but not me. My Legs then stopped, then I couldn't move my arms. Before the rest of my body could freeze like the others, someone teleported here, but I couldn't see since I just froze.
...
...
But then.
We all unfroze. The Dragon stood up, looking very healthy, and that's when I saw the people who teleported here: Lync and Nalaex. "We both healed the Dragon before we got frozen, since we were watching you on our little tv." Lync explained. Then I saw the doors open, and HallOfFame and Sanad came wandering out. "Eh... what happened?" HallOfFame wondered. "Not sure... Look! The stupid kids are here! Let's kill em!" Sanad shouted. "No no." HallOfFame replied. Sanad seemed confused. "I guess I got a bit carried away, and didn't realise that if I killed the Dragon, I would have frozen too, but this young group of kiddies... Saved us all." HallOfFame explained, while smiling. Then Tristen came out of the door. "SSS...." Connor hissed. "No no, He's good." I explained. I guess we forgave HallOfFame and Sanad and headed back to earth. Everything was normal.
As I entered my house with Mappy, I noticed Star was shouting on the computer, wondering where we were for 3 weeks. I just told her we were on a hoilday.
I don't know if I'll see the rest of my friends again, like Lync, Connor, and the rest, or even the Dragon. But then, Katy entered our house, with exciting news. "Guys! The Dragon left a message for us!" Katy cheered. Then we crowded around a small note, made out of soild gold and diamonds, saying:
Thank You, I'll Always Remember You.
And then we all smiled.
The End.
If this gets about 5 likes and some comments, I'll create a secret chapter.
Also, I'm quite unsure if I'll make another story after this, I'll think about it.
And also...
I hope you enjoyed the story, and thank you all that's in the story
Have a magical Christmas, and also a happy new year <3
Sincerely:
LouiseXminerX​

 

Loved it!

 

Yay
But can you add me to the End when we go home

 

1 word: Awesome!

 

I'm going to do a secret chapter since I'm so nice.

Secret Chapter...
The dragon stared into space, wondering. Some mysterious person appeared behind him. "You won't ever see them again you know." The anonymous person said. The Dragon growled. "Now now, I'm just saying." Anonymous said. A translator next to the Dragon appeared when the Dragon roared. "I just want to see them again to give them an award." The translator translated. "Well too bad, their back in earth now. Perhaps in your dreams you can see them." He said, then disappeared. The Dragon stared.
That night, it couldn't stop thinking. He couldn't take it any more. It spread its wings, ready for a long flight, then flew off.
Meanwhile, on earth. Mappy and I kept playing Team Fortress 2, when suddenly we heard people screaming. "Is the earth freezing again?" Mappy moaned. "Not sure, let's go outside." I suggested. We went out, and the Dragon of Time appeared. We were amazed, but then people started to call the police, because suddenly, police cars surrounded it. The Dragon roared. The translator next to it said "I just want to see Louise and her friends!" but then, a helicopter flew over it, dropped a huge net over the Dragon, making it trapped. "Stop it! He's not evil!" I shouted. But the police then dragged the net with the Dragon inside, into their huge jail. We chased after them, but then kicked us out when we tried going into the jail. "I hope it won't get hurt..." I started the worry. But then, Mappy had an idea.
"What is it? Trying to research." Katy answered. "Katy, we need your help, the police captured the Dragon, your a genius at breaking through buildings, right?" Mappy suggested. Suddenly the phone went off. "Arg." Mappy grumbled, but Katy zoomed right behind Mappy, making Mappy surprised. "I have this special timer then could make any door open." Katy said. He placed the Timer onto the door. We all ducked. When the Timer went off, the door opened.
We went inside, looking for the Dragon, but all there were was crazy people screaming in their jails. "LET US OUT! WE'LL GIVE YOU ALL OUR MONEY!" They kept shouting. We ignored them and suddenly saw a glass window. We looked through it and a huge room was in it, and the Dragon was in it.
Katy used her Timer again on the locked door next to it, and it opened. "Don't worry, we'll set you free!" Katy said, but then, an alarm went off, and the police zoomed into the room, crowding us. "Kids, get out now or we'll shoot!" A police officer said. "NEVER!" Mappy shouted.
The police got ready to shoot, and when they did, the bullets froze in mid air. The Dragon froze time again! We walked out of the way, but we didn't realise how the bullet were also pointing at the Dragon. When time resumed, the Dragon roared in pain as the bullets entered it's leg, then blew fire at the police. Katy got an explosion device and placed it on the wall, making the wall open. We all zoomed out, while the Policemen turned to ashes.
The Dragon roared, while the translator next to it said "Thank you once again, I need to give you an award." Then it gave us a teleporter. It smiled then flew off, back to it's home. "So... want to visit the Dragon using the teleporter?" Katy asked. "Let's visit it, everyday." I suggested, and we agreed.
The End... Again
Yeah, I just didn't want this story to become forgotten, so I hope you like this chapter.
There is a 70% chance I'll make a new story soon, possibly after Christmas.
But I'm worried no one will like the story...
But anyway, Merry Christmas, and hope you enjoyed ^_^
Thanks For Reading!!! :D​

 

Merry Christmas!
Also, you should write another story, this one and War 3.0 were awesome!
(idk if there were any other stories because these were the only 2 around since I joined, but I'm sure they were good)

 

Great job as always, @LouiseXminerX ♡
Is there another story coming?

 

For the people who are wondering if I'll make a new story or not, there is a chance,but there's a risk.
I may have to rush the story or not continue the story for about 2 weeks. why? Cause I'm going on a Cruise on January the 16th for 2 weeks, yes I will make a farewell forum before I go
Anyway, there's a chance I will make a new story before I go, but can you promise me something?
Can you keep commenting on my new story when I'm gone, because I don't want to bump my story, which means I won't be able to continue it then.
in a couple of days I will start my new story, but keep in mind to comment on it too so I can keep going ^_^
and I hope you all had a awesome Christmas ^_^
~LouiseXminerX

 

Okay, great!
Enjoy your cruise! =)

 

amazyn :D